#1March 14th, 2007 · 10:06 PM
91 threads
73 posts
United States of America
Vincula
She’s living in the fear of him
and now he comes for her again
he found out about her secret love from other men
she’s choking on her fear of him
she’s scared he’ll take her life
but now she’s fallen on the floor the boards broken

She walks in to the room again
she looks around to soon and then
she turns around in the dark the sparks go on
hiding in her old room bin
sees reflections in the tin
she’s hiding now until he leaves his searching.

People ask her in the streets
why she is staring at her feet
 she meets their eyes then says good bye
walking home she’s all alone
hiding in a broken home
she’s on her own
she knows he’s out there somewhere and he’ll find her

She walks in to the room again
she looks around to soon and then
she turns around in the dark the sparks go on
hiding in her old room bin
sees reflections in the tin
she’s hiding now until he leaves his searching.

He’s searching
and he won’t stop lurking in the dark he waits for her in silence

She’s hiding in the horse carriage
going along the old arch bridge
she searches for her love again she finds him
he is lying on the ground
a bloody dagger next to him is found
they pierced his heart
her heart slows down
she breaks down

They got him in his sleep
took him from the fair lady
and ripped him out of history

She walks in to the room again
she looks around to soon and then
she turns around in the dark the sparks go on
hiding in her old room bin
sees reflections in the tin
she’s hiding now until he leaves his searching.

Scared that he will find her soon
he’s lurking in her old bedroom
if she goes back she knows she’s doomed
he’ll end her life way to soon
if she goes back she knows she’s doomed
he’s lurking in her old bedroom
he’ll hunt her down
the sparks go down
it’s over
#2March 17th, 2007 · 09:48 PM
341 threads / 59 songs
4,361 posts
Cymru (Wales)
I'll give this good marks for being a different and rather exciting/intriguing theme.

I've seen you 'write' better and I think there's a lot of unnecessary rhymes in there.

But it's definitely a good story and as usual with pieces like this you need to hear the music that is meant to go with it!
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