#1March 14th, 2007 · 05:09 PM
91 threads
73 posts
United States of America
Explain
how can i try to explain
all your story's seem to stay the same
and your excuses end so lame
stop and let it be
just talk to me a while
and joke about the things we used to see
it's all gone in a little while

it used to be just us to
and now there's so much left to lose
and when i talk to you
it's like we're living in two different towns
and our voices get drowned out by the tiny sounds

how can i try to explain
all your story's seem to stay the same
and your excuses end so lame
stop and let it be
just talk to me a while
and joke about the things we used to see
it's all gone in a little while

and now it's like we're both strangers
and all our memories are one blur
as the times get further and further
and now it seems like our days a wast
woke up in this sweat felt a disgrace
now i dont even recognize your face

how can i try to explain
all your story's seem to stay the same
and your excuses end so lame
stop and let it be
just talk to me a while
and joke about the things we used to see
it's so hard for me to smile
#2March 14th, 2007 · 06:46 PM
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Cymru (Wales)
Nice piece!
Your getting better at penning the frustrations of relationships! lol

I found "it's all gone in a little while" a strange line, not that you haven't got other odd lines in there, it's just that this stuck out!!
Wouldn't "It will all be gone in a while" say it better!
"it's all gone in a little while" sounds like it only takes a while for it to go! 
#3March 14th, 2007 · 10:15 PM
91 threads
73 posts
United States of America
i dont think that "It will all be gone in a while" would be better because what my line is saying is that what is right now...will be gone soon. i mean...i guess it still means the same thing but then i'd have to change the beat and everything.
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