i think it's sweet

good ole love, nice approach at -

yes it's pretty sweet

Now, if the sun and the moon did become one, we'd have a problem.....Huston! lol

Nice bit of 5 minutes, simply written complex concept!
I'd turn 'father' and 'mother' around, even though it's a rhyme thing I still think they 'flow' better the other way.
This is the base for a 'really nice' song!