#1February 24th, 2007 · 12:30 AM
7 threads
10 posts
United States of America
You Like It
We're living in a land with mountain majesties,
rainbows growing out of trees.
And you like it
Yes you like it (oh oh)

We've got shooting stars and a unicorn,
this is the place where love is born.
Do you like it?
Yes you like it (oh oh)

We've got a sun that shines day and night,
this is the place where dream take flight.
And you like it
Yes we like it (oh oh)

Now if you'll go ahead and please look twice,
There's always a storm in paradise.
Yeah go ahead and please look twice
there's one in every paradise.

We're living in a land with mountain majesties,
We've got problems vast as seas
And You don't like it
No, you don't like it (no no)

We've got shooting stars and a unicorn,
this is the place where hearts are torn.
Do you like it?
No you don't like it (no no)

We've got a sun that shines day and night,
this is the place we learn to spite.
And you don't like it
No we don't like it (no no)

We're living in a land with mountain majesties,
Rainbows growing out of trees
We've got problems vast as seas
And you like it
But you don't like it (oh no)

We've got shooting stars and a unicorn,
this is the place where love is born
this is the place where hearts are torn.
Do you like it?
No who would like it (oh oh)

We've got a sun that shines day and night,
this is the place where dreams take flight
this is the place we learn to spite.
And you like it
But we don't like it (no no)
#2February 24th, 2007 · 05:44 AM
97 threads / 43 songs
500 posts
Australia
Interesting
nice shift in mood, but personally I think it would work better making the shift later in the song, seeing as the title is "You Like It", but, hey, I haven't heard the music to it.

Also, I find it has nice passages of writing in it, but to me, it doesn't really mesh together completely, in the sense that it needs something like a chorus or small lyrical passage to tie it together, there's too much of the same lyrical structure (it's ironic, break it up more, to tie it together better).

Anyway, I like it, but I don't love it yet. I haven't heard the music to it, so maybe some of my comments are invalid, who knows? You, so only you can make the decisions, I am just an opinion, but I do like it.

WB
#3February 24th, 2007 · 12:22 PM
341 threads / 59 songs
4,361 posts
Cymru (Wales)
Yes I follow some of WB comments , I also think it could turn' later in, but it does 'turn' and then 'twist' towards the end! : Do you like it? No who would like it (oh oh).
I also find it 'repetitive' though read properly most of it folds back on it's self, using the same structure but changing a few words.
I must say that I like it. And as a song I think it would work very well, the repetitiveness would become 'catchy'.
Funny how I feel you need some kind of big band behind you playing the music! You must be still in love!!
#4February 24th, 2007 · 10:52 PM
7 threads
10 posts
United States of America
sadly, there is no music to it. although in my mind, there would be a bit in between the beginning and the 'shift'.
i only play the piano, and i just started this year, so im still a beginner. 

the way its sung is upbeat and happyish, even through the shift.  i think that helps with the repetitiveness, and i myself do find it quite catchy =]
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