#1February 16th, 2007 · 09:20 PM
91 threads
73 posts
United States of America
Admit It
yesterday
i never herd a word you would say
it was the day
when my thoughts were a thousand miles away
today
i just gotta say
that this is the day i hate
and i dont want to participate
in anything
i just wanna scream out loud
and not hear a sound

i'm sitting here
it's always been so clear
and i've decided
life is so complicated
sometimes i really hate it
you have to admit it

today i woke up
i decided that yesterday i spoke up
just a little to much
i ended up
putting my foot in my mouth
now i'm heading south
as if it isnt enough

i need to chill out
i just want to shout
'I'M ON A FREAK OUT'

i'm sitting here
it's always been so clear
and i've decided
life is so complicated
sometimes i really hate it
you have to admit it

and today was the day
that i herd all the words that you will say
but i wont anyway
because in my mind
all my thoughts have been delayed

i'm sitting here
it's always been so clear
and i've decided
life is so complicated
sometimes i really hate it
you have to admit it
i have to admit it
#2February 17th, 2007 · 06:41 AM
341 threads / 59 songs
4,361 posts
Cymru (Wales)
Alright! This is more like it, cheers for posting this.
This is cool little lyric, it expresses the frustration in an intelligent understandable way.
It's got some good rhymes and some clever lines.

And there's more :
Seeing as the lyric review dept has had some excitement recently concerning the legitimacy of certain works I Googled 'Admit it' and came up with some interesting results.
No I did not find this lyric, don't worry! But what I did find did make me think, and I will Admit that my thought went in your favor.
I came across SAY ANYTHING - ADMIT IT and would you believe it, it is nothing but a 'bunch of insults made to rhyme' LMAO!
So I have to admit I've become one of those old hippies, who has to either turn away disillusioned with the future he sees taking place, or embrace adversity and move forwards smiling!  

The truth of the matter is that even the Sex Pistols or Exploited were beautiful but also turned quite a few stomachs in their time. And youth will always be frustrated because it doesn't yet understand!
And the frustration is the battle to understand!

So Rock on babe!
#3February 17th, 2007 · 07:20 PM
97 threads / 43 songs
500 posts
Australia
If I'm not mistaken...
this sounds like a nice response to kings comment on your lyric the other day. I'm glad you've taken account for his words. I think this is a great step in the right direction. I do enjoy this because there's still the hate and frustration of your other works, and you didn't change completely, but this doesn't have that outward insulting hate. Good job, keep it up.

WB
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