Just gettin some reaction

"This isn't right"

I'm sick of seein all these casualties
All these guns, all this war
Why is this our reality
there's gotta be somethin more

We all have families
all with identities, my friend
we all have destinies, and war isn't one of them

our lives aren't meant to be used to kill each other
when are we gonna realize that these are our sisters and brothers
all we want is to see another day
with with all these guns, there's just no way
all I see on the TV is how the bullets spray
and one day
I pray
that we may
find another way to solve our problems
because these people's lives we're absolutely robbin



its more a poem than an actual song, but whatevvv

Want a reaction? or what ever?

What I mean is, you only have one post at the moment so, what kind of / where from / angle of dangle , comment do you want?
You could be looking to write a classic!
You could testing us out (because this has won some Nobe prize or other)!
Or maybe you've just penned the injustices you see all around you, especially from the TV, because it's about all you can really do to put all that bloody frustration about it in some kind of 'place' / 'perspective'.
Now if you do this kind of thing often I'd say post some more please so we/I can see where your coming from!
If this is one of your first attempts at discovering your self and re-writing the news, then I'll say : keep it up, put it in perspective and find your self within it.

Otherwise your just being Cheeky!!  Boom! Boom!