#1January 28th, 2007 · 04:51 PM
91 threads
73 posts
United States of America
somebody else
sitting here by myself
listning to the radio
shame we had to bail
we put on quite a show
what am i gonna do
left on my answer phone
tell them what i told you
well right now i just dont know

you know
you never have to try and be somebody else
it'll always happen on its own
and you cant keep pretending to be somebody else
that just right ya know

just when you start to think
this day will never end
the day starts to break
and your heart will start to mend

it's funny when you think
it's never been so clear
staring you in the face
you get the rump right outa here

you know
you never have to try and be somebody else
it'll always happen on its own
and you cant keep pretending to be somebody else
that just right you know

and i say
you know
you never have to try and be somebody else
it'll always happen on its own
and you cant keep pretending to be somebody else
that just right you know
you cant keep pretending to be somebody else
it will happen on its own
and thats just right you know
yeah thats just right you know
#2January 28th, 2007 · 05:16 PM
77 threads / 45 songs
2,296 posts
United States of America
hi
Not bad...the only problem I have is this..it keeps repeating  a little to much for my taste..But, I havent heard this with Music...sometimes it doesnt matter if its repetitve

Flyer
#3January 29th, 2007 · 08:49 PM
2 threads
14 posts
Canada
Hmm, I agree. You repeat the chorus three times at the end. Again, might work, but just a thought. I do quite like that first verse though. Kept it nice a simple. It's kinda feels clean, when you read it. Well done there. But yes, any ideas as to when it could be heard with music?
#4January 30th, 2007 · 03:18 AM
97 threads / 43 songs
500 posts
Australia
Yes, it can be that way sometimes, it might be one of those choruses that can roll on seamlessly without break, and provides a thought provoking interesting way to finish a song off. Am I right?
Well, I've used this sort of thing before, works out fine, but it's something to hear in context to fully understand.
I'm guessing there's some kind of break in between the last choruses. What instrumentation goes with this? Do you use lots of riffs or guitar solos?

Just considering the lyrics, I think it's a nice little song. Good job!

WB
#5January 31st, 2007 · 10:08 AM
373 posts
China
you know
you never have to try and be somebody else
it'll always happen on its own
and you cant keep pretending to be somebody else
that just right ya know

...interesting, perhaps... what do you mean "it'll always happen on its own"?
being someone else?  are you saying were all someone else?
am i someone else pretending to be me?
what's not right?  pretending to be somebody else when i naturally
want to be myself...?
#6January 31st, 2007 · 05:42 PM
91 threads
73 posts
United States of America
it's supposed to be like, dont try to be like no body else. dont try to be unique, because everyone is different, so you dont have to try to be different cos it's just gonna happen naturally.

it's also saying, dont try to be someone that your not. dont try to dress, act, talk, or walk like someone else because being yourself is what makes you cool
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