#1January 7th, 2014 · 05:20 AM
3 threads
Germany
brave
HI Smiley
I know this song is long. longer as other songs i guess but i hope that's not bad?

https://soundcloud.com/janeh99/brave

Lyrics:

3 am and still canít sleep
thinking bout tomorrow what
if IĎmgonna fail
what if iím not brave enough

And then iím looking at your pic next to my bed
you used to say

You were brave enough to come till here
You were brave enough to live your dream
You can walk with your head held high
You were brave enough to try
Oh honey trust me youíre more than brave
More than brave

Tomorrows gonna be the day
when it decides if i can live my dream anylonger
iím sared of loosing everything
 iím scared of being not brave enough

And then iím looking at your pic next to my bed
you used to say

you were brave enough to come till here
You were brave enough to live your dream
You can walk with your head held high
You were brave enough to try
Oh honey trust me youíre more than brave
More than brave

Iíve got a dream that i keep
A part oft hat iíve been living now
but itís time to live it all
And i know now

I was brave enough to come till here
I was brave enough to live my dream
I can walk with my head held high
I start to believe your words
your more than brave

I was brave enough to come till here
I was brave enough to live my dream
I can walk with my head held high
And i start to believe
That i am brave
#2January 7th, 2014 · 12:38 PM
116 threads / 53 songs
3,059 posts
Netherlands
Yes that is quite long, also quite repetitive. Although I like the lyrics, and the way sing them, the music surely needs more variation. Distinct blocks of verses, choruses, a bridge - that can be done with just vocals and a guitar.

There is the Audio Review forum, by the way, so you don't have to link to SoundCloud as you can upload your song directly onto BandAMP (that's one of the Amp's nifty services). Just check your homepage and then the "Music" tab.

cheers, keep writing!
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