Got a hole in my shoe
it needs to be filled
Someone call the doctor-
Cuz my foots lookin ill
Got this hole in my sole
and it cant be fixed
And i cant erase my name
Cuz im on the devils list

I got a price
A temper and a contract
Say good by to veanus
Cuz I aint makin contact
Yeah I've been down-
But I aint never been this low
Sleepin with the earth,
Weeping for a show
Pull back the curtians
Watch the devils smile glow
Applaud with every thing you got
But just dont sell your sole
(To the Devil)


Now I got the riches,
I cant complain
Feels like luxury,
Through every inch of my brain
And I got the benze
And I got the fame
Yeah, I got the women
But they dont, feel the same

I solved my problem
but another came along
Something aint right
When blues is your song
Surrounded by faces
But I feel so alone
Something aint right
When your sole aint your own

So quit all the crying
This aint no spring time rain
Funny how things feel
When you got nothing else to gain

There are some wonderfully mature expressions here brother man...
And I can only assume that you is a youngin' by yer lack of cohrect spellin'... or concern...
i hate to b a grammer nazi, so's ill just stop now...
2 + 2 does not always equal jello...

the problem i have is with the incorrecto'S is if and when you're playin' on werds... godammit...
'cuz there's some good werdage here...

...aside from that...
you got something going here that werks...

Your one down dude!
So you rich too?
So is this really you or are you just projecting your self?
Got any more of this kind of thing? Or different, makes no difference!
Welcome to the bandAmp world too!

Na kings im not rich, just writing. i just cant get enough blues, im so filled with it i just gotta write it. Im glad you liked it And jackfancy, dont expect much improvment with the spelling and grammer, i save that stuff for school.

i think your gonna have to rephrase that

sorry... i'm an english teacher... as you can see, i don't give two shits for some grammar...
in fact i pervert the language often... so i was wonderin if you were playin on typo's and such...
aside from that speculation of inpaticularities
i like this piece...

yeah some of it, it would probably sound better if it was sung

Yes, I've come to notice how the simplest lyrics make good songs and complex 'well' written pieces are poetry but not songs!