#1January 25th, 2007 · 08:49 AM
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This Night I look Into
A Poem

This Night I look Into
 
This night I look into
the reflection from a star
the darkness that I hear
promise's of
dreams upon my wall
mist of darkness
assurance of my soul
sunlight I look for
as time grows old
seeking dust
to treasure gold
to love only
for a Moment in time
This night I look into
the reflection from a star
It surely has to be
yours...
yes
This night I look into
_______________________________
 
Flyer
January 5 2006
#2January 25th, 2007 · 09:12 PM
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Typo??
Flyer wrote…
January 5 2006
A year ago?

Now... About the poem.
Very intricate and thought provoking, words to think about...
Nice one Flyer. I could mill about my thoughts all day with this.

I would like to comment more, but I'm lost in a wormhole, thinking, always thinking about what things are, and what they will be. I am lost within myself.

  I think that means I like it.

Cheers!

WB
#3January 25th, 2007 · 09:35 PM
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thx
yes WB   I wrote this a yr ago...the date is correct
I tend to ramble when I write..I know its hard to follow....
Just wondering one night when I wrote this...This is a collection of thoughts that I had just doing some thinking about life
Thanks for the comment..Im glad you like this

Flyer
#4January 26th, 2007 · 11:08 AM
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China
this is a sweet line...
seeking dust to treasure gold
that sentence can evoke all kinds of heretical thought...

ever try to put this stuff to music...?
#5January 26th, 2007 · 09:08 PM
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Hi
Thanks Jack

No I havent tried to put this to Music...If you care to to add music to this  give it a try 

Flyer
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