I'm deep inside myself
labarynths block my way

I think and time goes on
and from that path I stray

why does this world hate me
no I won't take your hand

you don't know how I feel
you don't understand

In a see of wolf cries
the cry for help is all but lost
this is the story of the drowning

how can I tell the story 
no one ever perceivs as true

like through the child's eyes
this is the story I once knew

this worlds above me
this worlds against me

I see it from both sides
this world, what it can cause

with a helping hand I reach
and try to capture yours

your return is anger and hate
your not worth the hurt

though I feel the pain you feel
this feeling is inert

it's your life I walk by
my help for you is all but lost
this is the story of the drowner

we stand in this courtroom
we try to explain ourselves

I realise I'm the judge
and head becomes the tail

I prefer to write free form poetry but it's impossible to fit into any sort of track I compose. I much prefer the imagary in my other stuff.
anyway...

i really like this its simple and siomple is good because its easy to understand and hear a beat to it. i really like  this. you should post more lyrics  i think your pritty good at it. i would really like to see you write more stuff man, keep up the good work ^_^ you have a way with words

i love perverting the english language to the point of neglecting
grammar and such so my first question would be; are the spelling/grammar
mistakes intentional? sometimes they do serve a purpose is why i'm asking...

Yes... this is nice, it does work well, not oo think-y for a song, I could actually picture this having a good melody line. You do have a way with words, in the sense of song writing, it fits well.

Cheers!

WB

cheers everyone, and nah Jackfancy, I'm just crap at grammer and generally anything academic. Can out phylosify pretty much everyone I come I contact with and could make a fiesta beat a Ferarri but ask me to spell "the" corectly and I'm fucked.
Cheers all.

you talked about fitting it into a track...
i sometimes take my free form written werds
and sing them over a track i've laid down that
consists of a simple drum loop and a simple guitar riff
but with some variance in the riff to evoke different emotions
and press record and just go... over and over...
i've got a couple of pieces that the music is so simple it's stupid
but the lyrics and the words came across, to my ears, wonderful
and was done in one take... so i keep 'em that way...
don't know if you've tried that... it's a suggestion for working with
free form thoughts...

Actually that sounds like a very good idea. Cheers for the advice. I've already got a melody for this but that may help in future lyric writing.
Also, aboutthe grammer, it is incorrect on several ocasions on purpose but hbut there may be some places where it's not suppose to be but is. Plus, yes, my spelling is still apauling.
Chhers,
KI

well, fuck the books...
good thing it's not stopping you from writing...