This really good man.  Nice poetry.  What kind of music did you have in mind?

Cheers Tom for bringing these up, I'd been to Jacks page to look for his stuff because I wanted to know more but I hadn't seen this one either! So what happened to commenting on peoples work!!!!!!!

Wow! I really like this too!
I was reading a 'quotes' thread last night on another site, I would quote this :

And so it's quiet here but not quite how I want it
Could stand a little noise just not the way you flaunt it
Don't know the time ain't been outside for days
I've been staring at the walls and my shadows empty ways...

As it is it's beautiful, if it is as 'classically' sung as it is written then it would be up there with the best as far as I'm concerned!
I love how you plainly play with words :
'I thought you were the one
Man I was outnumbered'
I REALLY want to hear you/someone sing your stuff!