#1January 20th, 2007 · 09:00 PM
91 threads
73 posts
United States of America
Crashed and Burned
i'm sorry
that i called you
on a friday
but you said no
so maybe
next time
you'll reconsider me
yeah we'll just have to see

now i asked you once
and crashed and burned at your feet
while everyone watched
and now they're all laughing at me
cant you see
cos you said 'no'

just because i'm a little nerdy
doesnt mean that i always swing that way
you've got complications
and a reputation
wouldnt want to get in your way

now i asked you once
and crashed and burned at your feet
while everyone watched
and now they're all laughing at me
can you see
cos you said 'no'

you read my words and said they're beautiful
said they made you cry
but i guess it was a lie
and now i've realised what you've done

now i asked you once
and crashed and burned at your feet
while everyone watched
and now they're all laughing at me
can you see
cos you said 'no'

just because your a little nerdy
doesnt mean that you always swing that way
he's got complications
and a reputation
get in his way
#2January 21st, 2007 · 07:13 AM
341 threads / 59 songs
4,361 posts
Cymru (Wales)
You've got a good talent for words, I like this a lot.
Pity you don't spend some time realizing these to good simple punk guitar tracks. As in put them to music!

This is really cool, I like the way, no, I really like the way you twist the story around so he's the nerd, irony is a key element of creation you may find!
The chorus is catch and different enough, and its fresh and young, like you! so you should be the one to sing it too, if you spent time now regularly bashing at your guitar for a few hours per day/week by the time your 16 or so you could literally blow a crowd away with your stuff!

"Dedication is what its all about"
But to learn this at a young age and do something about it is an honest virtue!
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