Here's a new song I wrote yesterday the recorded version should follow sometime today

"They said it couldn't last
 They said it couldn't be
 It's just some kind of lust
 But now i see

 That I cannot go back
 To the life I had before
 We might be on the wrong track
 But I want more

chorus
 And now it's plain to see
 That life is you and me
 The feelings have just taken over
 They have to face the truth
 I'm so in love with you

 Each moment without you
 Brings sorrow to my heart
 Ain't easy to be with you
 It's worse to be apart
 And I will not betray
 What we knew from the start
 I don't care what they say
 I will follow my heart

 chorus

 And now that years have gone
 We got there in the end
 They said it wouldn't last
 We proved them wrong again

 chorus(add lib)

Nice story about life and its everchanging ways, maybe a title about moving forward, or something like that would be appropriate, look forward to hearing the song 

I was thinking about "What were the odds" but it sounded very Phil Collins to me

hm.. a typo in the lyrics:  (2nd verse) Brings sorrow to my heart.  An "s" on the end of "bring". 

hm.. a title.  my thoughts are something along the lines of a "they said it wouldn't last" theme.  you use that line a couple of times, which makes it a good theme, but I wouldn't use that exact phrase for the title.  Anyway... the titles that come to mind are as follows (in no particular order)...

Fidelity
Wouldn't Last
No Return
The Truth about Lonely Souls  (haha! abbreviated, it's TLS!  yeah!)
Assumptions and Such

... hm.  anyway.  bonne chance!

TLS

Waiting for the song vincent!
Because the lyrics are really nice, a real song, a story, love, longing, rhymes and rhythms.
The only thing that bugs me is the word 'lust', it's out of place in the lyric. Might be ok in the song!

A title, how about 'A Lasting Presence', seeing as there's the sticking together throughout troubled times...

I think I'll name it( drum roll)
"no matter what they say"
done
thanks you your views on the subject

yeh, that's a good one, I'll be looking out for that in the audio review 

sorry I've changed the title of the thread but as I've settle for a title now I wouldn't want any confusion with the recorded track

What was wrong with the word "lust" Most love story start by a physical attraction no?
Lust is one of my favorite word and my favorite virtue for that matter!lol

Yes this I can agree on! 

But in the song...? I cant put my finger on it but if you put eg. 'game' instead, it would be softer, like the rest of the piece. Lust sticks out because it implies too much, too soon while the rest is not as 'lustful'.
Each word is a magic word, they all carry their own spell, so lust is lustful, love is loving, each word has its spheres and nature, so I say why take the listener to a 'lustful' place when the song is about love, togetherness and endurance?