#1November 26th, 2012 · 05:52 PM
181 threads / 54 songs
1,930 posts
Canada
The Dark Suns Burn
Underneath a burning building
Below the rubbel, fear and all
It feels like the air escaping
Colour the words of your broken soul

Trace your voice through the violent haze
Running from something I don't believe
Running from someone that couldn't be me
Colour the walls of this empty maze


This is romantic chaos
This is the dark sun's burn
and the dark sun burns
and does it?


The light breeds end and the dark breeds fear
The smoke corrupts and the stone controls
Feel your smile return to my ear
Colour the dark, I can find you whole

Embrace you in the final moment
Peace found in the isolation
Peace caressed by deprivation
Colour was never meant to be stolen


This is romantic chaos
This is the dark sun's burn
and the dark sun burns
and does it?

This is romantic chaos
This is the dark sun's burn
and the dark sun burns
and does it?

Do we let it?
#2November 27th, 2012 · 05:57 AM
371 threads / 187 songs
3,355 posts
United Kingdom
You are on a Roll - Keep it up
#3November 28th, 2012 · 03:03 AM
340 threads / 59 songs
4,344 posts
United Kingdom
Yes Yes Yes ... keep on digging ... this is depth, dark and all seeing
And yea your on a roll, in that even in these dark depths your still getting it to fit
This has the right amount of poetry and the right amount of sense, it's a shining light from the depths of time.
As I've said ... keep on doing it, it's all you .......
#4November 29th, 2012 · 12:36 AM
181 threads / 54 songs
1,930 posts
Canada
Thank you guys so much! I have much more like this all written and coming, I just need to record them.
Working on a couple songs right now. Hope to have my first debut solo album done by the end of Jan 2012 thank you guys so much for being with me through all of it. you really have no idea how incredible it is
#5November 29th, 2012 · 02:35 AM
340 threads / 59 songs
4,344 posts
United Kingdom
TheKunadiun wrote…
you really have no idea how incredible it is :)
I must disagree ... I think I have a pretty good idea of how incredible it is 
#6December 28th, 2012 · 08:56 AM
3 threads / 1 songs
9 posts
United Kingdom
I enjoyed this,  I like your use of language and also using the word colour as an action during the first few verses as it sets up and makes more powerful the line 'colour was never meant to be stolen', which for me gives it a deeper meaning in relation to your song, inelligent songwriting.  hope the album is coming along well.
#7January 1st, 2013 · 02:13 PM
181 threads / 54 songs
1,930 posts
Canada
Hey thanks so much jas That means a lot! Yes the album is going well and this song will be on it. stay tuned
#8May 11th, 2014 · 11:00 PM
157 threads / 30 songs
1,948 posts
United States of America
what great lyrics, so visual and telling.  excellent writing
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