It looks like time stands still
We're still the same old picture
It seems like nothing's changed
Our life's an evil circle

I love how it goes on and on
My head keeps spinning 'round
As pretty as a picture
I'm in this evil circle

I can't do anything to stop it
I take it step by step
There's no way I can fight it
It makes me sick, it makes me sick!

All my life
I've been living in it
All my life
I'm getting tired of it
Still my life
Is an evil circle
I'm gonna break it
Now...

I know the time stood still
Like someone had died
It never ends
This evil circle

You do something wrong
You do it again
To cover the truth
That's how it goes

All my life
I've been living in it
All my life
I'm getting tired of it
Still my life
Is an evil circle
I'm gonna break it
Yeah! Let's break it!
All my life
I was living in it
All my life
I got tired of it
But I found my way out...

oauph...  i feel a major cliffhanger   you found your way out, eh?  why don't you share the secret?  haha..

the progression is interesting here.. you go from saying that you love the evil circle, to "getting tired of it".  without the progression, the song would have lost some luster, i do believe

i like your use of punctuation... the exclamation points, specifically   we may have discussed this on a different post of yours, but would you mind telling me the general sound that your music would feel like?  (sorry, my english sucks today.  that was pretty rocky grammar.)

i can't decide if this is a contradition: I know the time stood still and then over to the theme of the evil circle   did the time stand still and THEN continue on it's way along the circle?  or was does it feel like it's standing still all the time?

XO, TLS

oh..

PS-  i'm glad you're not stuck in the verse-chorus-verse-chorus-bridge-chorus-chorus layout   props to you for breaking the mold

Well... It feels like the time stands still when the same things happen everyday... You know? It's a circle, yes. It's like deja-vu... 

(actually, I haven't found my way out of this evil circle yet)

 

haha, well keep me posted, then

maybe the last line could be something more like "i`m finding my way out..." instead!