#1December 22nd, 2006 · 01:53 AM
91 threads
73 posts
United States of America
dirty liar
Excuse me sir, do i have your attention,
There’s something if you don’t mind i’d like to mention,
So open those ears, sit your butt down and shut your mouth
I’m aware that it’s hard for you to do that,
All i ask is lay down, put your feet up
Now soak in, pay attention, learn a lesson loud and clear

Chorus
Hey, you’re a dirty liar,
You wronged me out for something i thought was right,
wanted to be left alone,
no I'm not gonna be shown around like your golden prize
Oh, i looked around,
Look what happened, you found out
You never satisfy me

Never trusted anyone in the first place,
You turned me up, your disgusting anyway
Hear that music, crank it up,
Is there something familiar in the singers voice?
Turn it down, now listen to me,
What made you think you were my authority
I’m awake, finally, i’m able to move on (just gotta tell the truth)

Chorus
Hey, you’re a dirty liar,
You wronged me out for something i thought was right,
I wanted to be left alone,
no, I'm not gonna be shown around like your golden prize
Oh, i looked around,
Look what happened, you found out
You never satisfy me

do these word stick to you, hope they do
Think about it, think about it
Stick to you like superglue, keep you from the things you do

Chorus
Hey, you’re a dirty liar,
You wronged me out for something i thought was right,
I wanted to be left alone,
No I'm not gonna be shown around like your golden prize
Oh, i looked around,
Look what happened, you found out

Hey, you’re a dirty liar,
You wronged me out for something i thought was right,
I wanted to be left alone,
no I'm not gonna be shown around like your golden prize
Oh, i looked around,
Look what happened, you found out
You never satisfy me
#2December 22nd, 2006 · 04:00 AM
30 threads
169 posts
United States of America
boycott
Bee, I am not going to comment on your work anymore until you start reviewing other peoples works and responding to our comments about your own. This is expected of people who post.

You have made 25 lyric posts, but offered only one review, and have not responded to a single review of your own posts. It's the golden rule - "Do unto others as you would have them do unto you".

This is a community, and we want to include you in it. If you aren't ready to be a part of it, I understand. But you're either in or your out, as far as I am concerned. How about it?
#3December 23rd, 2006 · 07:23 AM
341 threads / 59 songs
4,361 posts
Cymru (Wales)
A! I have seen a comment somewhere this morning, I think it was even a song of mine.

I agree fully with simon, and would have put more words to it a few night ago, but I couldn't be bothered, I must be picking up the vibe!

You see the point is, someone takes the time to read, think about and comment on your work, when you read that and think about it and then comment, it shows the commentator that you are serious about what you do and about what others think of your work.
The other side of this is that by thinking about what another has thought about while reading your work, you not only see your own work through different eyes, you will learn so much more about your self and your ways, which is what it is all about ultimately.
And the people commenting on your work kind of know this, certainly in a lyric forum, and it's a bit of a let down when it's all 'one way traffic'.

Taking part means taking part.
And bandAmp is a family whether your a super star or not, this is where you are.
So come on Bee, grow.

Your still on the 'leave me alone', 'be with me' trip, though you've said it in a different way with this piece of yours.
You seam to 'slap' the very thing you want! I can elaborate but wont until I know it's being heard.
I'm off to the pictures with my 4 year old daughter Bye!
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