Take a walk on a Sunday morn’
Down to church - get your soul reborn
Looking for answers you can’t find
Turning the questions in your mind

Reach for life as it’s racing by
Love has left you high and dry
Every day brings new regret
Of what you’re giving for what you get

Feel your ankles sinking deep
Into the sand where the slope is steep
The other side’s a reciprocal rhyme
So you plant your feet for the endless climb

Watch your dreams start to slip away
Into a memoir of growth and decay
Your voice is sweet but your song won’t last
Will your questions linger when your life has passed?

A new idea, an age begun-
Wise man caught in the web he’s spun
The past curves back so far ahead
The circle turns ‘till the child is dead

Save your face for the painters brush
Fleeting moments define the rush
Life spans changes of equal force
Years draw hard on the solar source

I’m watching you, you’re watching me
Fulfill each others prophesy
Redefining right and wrong
With different questions, a different song

Divergent paths will often bring
Converging spirits to the spring
Of life and love where answers wait
Along the path to heavens gate

I think this an exceptional piece of writing.
Its a journey, it leaves from the right place and it arrives at the right place.
I keep on reading it and its wonderful every time.

The 'child is dead' bit is a bit off putting.
'reciprocal rhyme' and 'solar source' also stick out in a way I don't like.

But these are only 7 words, all of the other words are exactly where they should be!

I love those lyrics as soon as i read them tones of ideas come to my mind and melody are floating in the air
I wish I could be as lyrical as you are
It will be so easy to compose with such beautiful text