did you ever listen to me?
and is that the reason why we're gone?
was it all just to tempting?
yeah.
thats why i'm singing this song

when i'm walking down the street
and your face comes up
will someone save me from this dream?
why cant i wakeup?

the world just flys around me
like its never ending
and when you look at what i've done
would you mend it?
for me

when i'm walking down the street
and your face comes up
will someone save me from this dream?
why cant i wake up?

when i'm lying in my bed
it's like i'm lying to my self again
and i'm thinking in my head
its like i'm all by my self and then

i see you every day
oh joy
and when i'm walking in the rain
will the sun come out?

when i'm walking down the street
and your face comes up
will someone save me from this dream?
why cant i wake up?

This one really tickled me. I like the word play and the way you "almost ryhme" some of the lines. There is a term for that, but I can't remember it. I remember a lyricicst saying that if you settle for words that almost rhyme, it gives you a lot more options, and nobody listening to the song will ever really notice. You seem to have figured that our on your own. Pretty slick.

I especially like the second line - it really hooked me and reeled me in.  They are ambiguous to me, but between you and the person you are writing this too, it would be crystal clear. You could be saying that the reason "we're gone" is that he did listen to you, or you be saying that he didn't listen to you, or you could be asking him which.

Then you go on and you keep the story straight and true, you expand on it and you show us all the different times and ways that the questions arise. It's really quite good. I'm smiling 

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