Perfect lives, telling lies
Telling me what I'd be
Who I'm not supposed to be

Young boy killed his old dad
After he tried suicide

He could not watch him do so wrong
He said that some are not born strong
Enough to move on

Boy was taken by some men
He thought that they were his dad's old friends
They were only there to help
He struggeled hard to get away

They put a needle in his arm
He fell asleep before the dawn
They put the boy in isolation
He thought about his poor old mom
She told him that she loved him great

The boy woke up and found himself
In a PRISON CELL!

Wow! full on! grunge!

I'd change 'old dad' to 'old man', and I'd call his 'mom', either 'mother' or some thing like 'old lady' or 'old dear',
it makes it 'grungier' and flows better, to me any way!

And I'd think about giving 'Boy' a name maybe, makes it less 'primitive' and more 'personal'. Like 'Johnny' or something 'general'

But that's just what I think.

Once you get your recording levels sorted out you can definitely put this to the music you've made.

I agree with Kings give the boy a name, it adds more meaning, because every name has a special meaning, so choose wisely if you do descide to give him a name.
other than that I like it!
check out my lyrics too!
xXxsaharaxXx

sounds like a great song in the works id be interested to hear the musical parts to these lyrics, and not to draw on the other posts but i do also agree with the addition of a name
to wrap it up excellent lyrics for the style ur going for good work