#1December 3rd, 2006 · 08:31 AM
340 threads / 59 songs
4,344 posts
United Kingdom
This could have been such a beautiful song
More heartache...........................

I would like to know what you think, cheers

There was a time
When she was mine
I gave her all the time in my world

This could have been such a beautiful song
Now desperation drives me on
Now I try to explain, how it all comes out wrong
This could have been such a beautiful song

Sitting in a corner
Like a man insane
Trying to forget
Like a woman on a train

This could have been such a beautiful song
Now desperation drives me on
Now I try to explain, how it all comes out wrong
This could have been such a beautiful song

Itís all right
No itís all wrong
This could have been such a beautiful song

Itís all wrong
How can it be all right?
How can we hold each other now?
After what was said last night?

This could have been such a beautiful song
Now desperation drives me on
Now I try to explain, how it all comes out wrong
This could have been such a beautiful song

Two sides to the same coin
That makes sense
But thereís no change

I know life goes where you take it
I know love grows where you make it
I know that the song is all sheís got on
Otherwise her eyes are naked

Nothing comes from nothing
And you live with it until you die
This could have been such a beautiful song
Why did you make me cry?

Nothing will make you change your mind
Nothing will bring it back
Nothing will make a difference
To everything we had.

This could have been such a beautiful song
Now desperation drives me on
Now I try to explain, how it all comes out wrong
This could have been such a beautiful song
#2December 3rd, 2006 · 08:47 PM
6 threads
138 posts
India
hey i really like this lyrics. this is a beautiful song............... neat job.

heartache 
#3December 4th, 2006 · 07:49 PM
30 threads
169 posts
United States of America
a beauty
This is very nice, a nice story told with plenty of emotion. Sounds very thoughtful and reflective. I really like the simple lines: "It's all right/No it's all wrong". It sounds like you are starting to let yourself slip into platitudes, then you remember the purpose of what you are saying, and you get back to being honest with yourself and with your listeners. It's effective.
#4December 7th, 2006 · 12:18 PM
9 threads
75 posts
United States of America
whoa!
I love it, especially the "this could have been a beautiful song" part, really good. Just goes to show that everything good doesn't have to be beautiful.
Well you commented mine so I commented yours.
#5December 7th, 2006 · 10:36 PM
91 threads
73 posts
United States of America
nicee
its really good. i would just suggest that you dont repeat 'This could have been such a beautiful song' as much. add something new! ya know?
i do read your comments. anyways, this song is something that i dont hear to often..well the type anyways. but toss it up a little bit.
#6December 18th, 2006 · 08:47 PM
116 threads / 26 songs
1,362 posts
United States of America
i think i agree with Bee, here.  I like the line, but for my personal taste, i feel like it`s almost deluded for how much it`s used...?  i dunno.  i can`t decide.
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