#1December 2nd, 2006 · 10:19 PM
91 threads
73 posts
United States of America
we're in the past
I cant believe I trusted you
When I looked into your eyes they breath so true
But now there’s not even one hue
Now there’s darkness
Yeah

I told you the truth
Held nothing back
I was honest with you
But you weren’t back

I found out from somebody else
Yeah
And when I came up to you
All you said was
You were getting tired of your old self

I told you the truth
Held nothing back
I was honest with you
But you weren’t back

Now I put us in the past
And I’m never going back
So get over it
I’m trying to get over you

I told you the truth
Held nothing back
I was honest with you
But you weren’t back
Told you the truth
I was honest with you
#2December 3rd, 2006 · 07:56 AM
341 threads / 59 songs
4,361 posts
Cymru (Wales)
I really like the story's you tell, you must have had a really raw deal from some dude somewhere!
But you definitely put it and him in their place.

You obviously know what you mean but I don't get the "But you weren’t back" bit,
or should I say,
I feel you could have used another word instead of 'back' to end the chorus, something to make it rhyme and thus flowing it better.

Yea men in general are not the greatest creatures at expressing themselves.
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