here are some lyrics that i came up with while i was out a dinner. Any suggestion tell me and if you have any ideas on a title that would be helpful. Thnx and hope you and enjoy.

Verse 1
Your dad caught us kissing again
I told him I was just your friend
Then he chased me down the hall
I bumped into your mom and now everything’s my fault

(Chorus melody plays, no lyrics are sung)

Verse 2
Remember when you pretended to cry
The day I ask you who was that other guy
Then you lied and said he was a friend
I guess that tonight I’m going home with my hand again 

Chorus pt. 1
The light is red and I want to go
You hold my hand and tell me no
But we both know this has to end
Because we could never be friends

Chorus pt. 2
Its best for me
And best for you
It’s not me
It’s always been you

Bridge
The light is red and I want to go
(The light is red and I want to go)
It’s not me
IT’S ALWAYS BEEN YOU



Verse 1
Chorus with no lyrics
Verse 2
Chorus pt. 1 and 2
Music only played
Bridge
Chorus pt. 1 & 2

You seem to know how it should be laid out.

Does it have a musical track then?

I'm torn between whether it should be for a boy band or as a rock ballard at the moment

'I guess that tonight I’m going home with my hand again' is not my taste in lyrics unless its all meant that way and good, cite 'sex pistols' among many others.

It has cringe factor in this piece.

I like the 'light is red and I want to go' bit, you could do a lot with just that.

Did this really happen? shit he?

As for a title, what about 'The light is red'?