lol, yeah: I quote:     


but it's funny nevertheless...

because it's well, clearly not serious at all, and doesn't pretend to be serious even (like lots of death metal pretends to be serious). So praise for you on that account.

Hmm, must say, I don't know about the flow of the words, if I read it out loud I'm really eager to find out how it's supposed to sound... Any chances of you creating a tune out of it?

yeh..definitly twisted...enough to scar any child for life...I have to agree with Puppet about the flow...I sort of sang it to myself using the traditional melodies...and it didn't quite work...some sentences were too long, but if you have a different tune in mind then it might work.