#1February 21st, 2012 · 07:07 PM
3 threads
Australia
Temptation (working title)
Like the seasons we can change,
There's still time to stand for something
Name the price that you would pay, a sacrifice you are afraid to make
There's  a fire inside that keeps on burning, that keeps on burning
There's an ocean tide that keeps on turning, that keeps on turning, there's no place left to hide
Let the gift you bare come to life,
This hibernation is becoming tired
no more hanging in the shadows
come and see the world in a different light
There's  a fire inside that keeps on burning.
#2February 24th, 2012 · 03:46 PM
371 threads / 187 songs
3,377 posts
United Kingdom
I'm no expert with lyrics, but they do appear short, not that's stopped famous bands like Pink Floyd

kings here on bandAMP took three short songs and put them together and called it "Three Wise Men' - and miraculously it worked like a dream
#3March 2nd, 2012 · 03:41 AM
short
#4March 2nd, 2012 · 02:52 PM
181 threads / 54 songs
1,930 posts
Canada
I think these are really good. Sometimes short lyrical ideas can be the best (like Denis mentioned in Pink Floyd's case.  ) I think these would go great with some epic music.
#5March 3rd, 2012 · 06:11 AM
340 threads / 59 songs
4,344 posts
United Kingdom
I think the first two lines are amazing :

Like the seasons we can change,
There's still time to stand for something

The third fits but the fourth line makes it a poem.

The whole song is in those two lines, the rest could keep the thread and some words but I think making it a song would change the flow.
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