Could this be a song?

I suppose everything can be if you want it to be.


I know the things that you want to hear
Because I want to hear them too
I know the thing that turn you on
As they turn out to be so true

I know about those little things that you hold dear
And what they mean to let you hear
I want to be the one you see
To say how real things are that seem to be

So listen as I whisper in your ear

It’s like rain
Hear it comes again
It’s like thunder
You can’t stop it
Take you under
It’s in your face
Some summer
I want to know how you taste
And you’ve got my number

It’s like the ocean
And golden sand
You sit and rock that motion
And your soul understands
For all our forevers
We still go hand in hand

thank you for your credit about my song (adore) Am I aloud to try put som music to this lyric?
Take care
/achillea

Told you I would read it!
you have an awesome talent writing lyrics.
And yes I think it could be a somg!

I'm getting better reviews for my lyrics than I am for my songs!!!

Thank you both kindly,

Achillea - you are more than welcome to put music to it, and to be honest with you I could use some enthusiasm towards these lyrics of mine, I have written a lot over the years and 98% of them need music.

xXxsaharaxXx - I missed the bit when you said you would read it, thank you for doing so any way.

yeah! me too! most of the time mine are lyrics in need of music.....i wrote a tonne!

A! aetherius the I

Could it not be one of the most beautiful frustrations?
The magic within. As its beauty bursts out from deep inside, and all you want to do is share that beauty.

Music and instruments are but interpretations and expressions of the human voice any way.

Most of these lyrics I sing, no instruments, just the music they were born with.
I'm trying at the moment to record and upload some acappella stuff, these very lyrics sung out loud!!!.
Keep an eye out if your interested.

O and cheers for reading.