It's late tonight
And we are so alone
But the moon's still shining bright
And I know I don't want to go home
So let's find another way, tomorrow
Let's stay another day or two

(chorus)
And you know, better than anyone
what you say echoes in my ears
So don't shout
and don't doubt me
Just come lay here
next to me
let's waste the day

And I've found
that you've wound me up
for another round of games
And I see
how you stand so close to me
I don't know what you're up to
But I won't give up
Trust me I'll figure you out

(chorus) [2x]

I think this could work well... definitely acoustic this though..


     A small bit of electric for a good guitar solo..


    otherwise... this would be sweet.. using multiple vocal lines overlapping slightly..

                        JimK

its all electric actually XD

I want another guy singer for this, yeah, blink182 style

HEY!!!!!!! ok i have a proposition for you!!! i'm looking to collab on one song so i can help you out with this one and you can help me out with the other one!!! ok on to your review!!!

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your song has GREAT style i really like it i can see the electric guitar and what your talking about blink 182 style
actualy it could go either way with the acoustic electric thing!!! (but still better style with the electric) its almost like

whats my age again + baby its cold outside (xmas song) = your song!!!!! lol i love it

this is a really great song...... and i would love to collab with you!!! my voice is pretty cool, or atleast people tell me that and i've been practicing ALOT!!! i have a little cold (i have all weekend but its letting up today and i feel ALOT better) but it dosnt faze me much today anyway it'll be fun to see this song played anyway PM me please so i will know!!!!