#1December 20th, 2011 · 01:12 AM
40 threads
165 posts
United States of America
Memory Lane
scuffing my chucks on the pavement
hood up in the pouring rain
strings pulled tight
tears in my eyes
nothing to take for the pain

you left my doorstep that morning
taking with you all I had
breaking me down into nothing
leaving me out for the bad

It's here on this street
that you'll remember me
the good times, the bad
the best ones we had
the fun and the games
the love and the pain
it's always going to be the same
walking down memory lane


take back the promises you made me
take back the i love yous
take back all the things you said
leave me here to sing the blues

I've waited days for a downfall rain
to try and remember you
the way that you smile, the look in your eyes
everyone of those sleepless nights
dreams that will never come true
here in the rain without you

It's here on this street
that you'll remember me
the good times, the bad
the best ones we had
the fun and the games
the love and the pain
it's always going to be the same


scuffing our chucks on the pavement
hoods up in the pouring rain
hands held tight
light in our eyes
walkin' down memory lane



*** Needless to say it's sorta rough, I just sort of slapped it together in the past half hour. Not bad though. Let me know what you think. Haven't really had any great material lately so I get inspired by the past sometimes.
As always thank you for reading, I love you for it!**

Thanks!
-Miss White
#2January 16th, 2012 · 02:38 PM
187 threads / 27 songs
2,794 posts
Germany
I had a waltz rhythm in my mind when I read the chorus
#3January 16th, 2012 · 10:35 PM
40 threads
165 posts
United States of America
the sheet music for this is actually 3/4 time 
#4January 17th, 2012 · 10:21 AM
187 threads / 27 songs
2,794 posts
Germany
Let's hear it  plllllllease
#5January 17th, 2012 · 09:12 PM
40 threads
165 posts
United States of America
TritonKeyboarder wrote…
Let's hear it  plllllllease

all in good time... although, time has been dragging on for some while 
#6January 18th, 2012 · 06:34 AM
117 threads / 54 songs
3,063 posts
Netherlands
Fantasy wrote…
the sheet music for this is actually 3/4 time  :)

sheet music eh? yeah do it! let's hear it!

btw that marine jacket looks really good on ya. Now hit the mic and gimme a 3/4 beat!
#7January 18th, 2012 · 12:41 PM
40 threads
165 posts
United States of America
aye aye! lol I will I will!!! And thanks, I love this jacket.
#8September 19th, 2012 · 10:45 AM
340 threads / 59 songs
4,344 posts
United Kingdom
Is this your last lyric upload?
It has been a while.
Just read in your blog that you were in between relationships and you have a bad case of writers block .... well that is you were. Hows things these days ?
Writers block is just that a big (or small) block, a bit of side stepping or even changing coordinates for a while usually helps ... writing is like dreaming in that it sorts things out from the day before so writing becomes a way of working things out that happen in your life ... while they are happening your 'within it', writing is taking a perspective of 'it', usually from some distance. ..... space distance, time distance, emotional distance or mental distance .... a different perspective !

Hope your having a very good birthday

Dont be too distant though ! 
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