4:21 AM 11/30/2007


A lil Christmas song...the plan is to have the completed version of the song/vox/music posted in about 7-10 days...of Course its a Collaboration....you have to wait and see who the Collaborators will be

"I Heard Santa"

Verse 1:
The snow is falling
its not landing on my head
I made a promised
that I would be asleep in my bed
I kept looking out my window
to see Rudolph's shiney red nose
a wonderful and beautiful
glowing, glow

Verse 2:
I wrote a letter
of gift wishes I made
I addressed it to the North Pole
I Know Santa got it
because I have been told
the Mail
gets delivered
in the freezing cold

Chior Chorus:
I heard Santa
on the roof top
I heard Rudolph's
click clock, click clock's
sleigh bells
were jingling
while grazing tree tops
I heard Santa walking
and Rudolph's
Click clock's

Verse 3:
In the morning I went downstairs
It was quiet
all through the house
Granma & Granpa
were still asleep
there was my letter
I wrote to Santa
along side a empty glass
was a Baseball Glove
a hat
and a Baseball Bat

Chior Chorus:
I heard Santa
on the roof top
I heard Rudolph's
click clock, click clock's
sleigh bells
were jingling
while grazing tree tops
I heard Santa walking
and Rudolph's
Click clock's

Lyrics By :

Flyer

once again flyer, another amazing song in the making..its got all making of exitement at christmas, cheeky Rudolph having a light snack on the tree tops.. and the quietness of the eve...apart from the click clocks...mmm sweet song.. you never stop amazing me. do you? cant wait to hear itttttt...xxxxxxxxx

It reminds me when I was little!(probably just about everyone when they were younger.)
Maybe with like the lick clocks n such actually make those sounds
soooooooooooooo excited!!!!!!!!!!!!
 

Great lyrics. I'm eager to hear it in completion. There's just one line there that bugs me, verse 1, last line: "glowing glow", I think you should find a replacement for glowing as you're using glowing to describe the glow, but you can already tell that it's glowing just from the word glow, so another description, maybe glistening, I don't know, something else that fits...

Other than that, a smashing job, can't wait for christmas, I'll probably put up my own christmas song too.

I did change the lyrics   on the final cut WB...dunno if you have heard the song yet...but, heres the link to it

Thanks


Flyer



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