#1November 30th, 2007 · 05:57 AM
77 threads / 45 songs
2,296 posts
United States of America
I Heard Santa
4:21 AM 11/30/2007


A lil Christmas song...the plan is to have the completed version of the song/vox/music posted in about 7-10 days...of Course its a Collaboration....you have to wait and see who the Collaborators will be

"I Heard Santa"

Verse 1:
The snow is falling
its not landing on my head
I made a promised
that I would be asleep in my bed
I kept looking out my window
to see Rudolph's shiney red nose
a wonderful and beautiful
glowing, glow

Verse 2:
I wrote a letter
of gift wishes I made
I addressed it to the North Pole
I Know Santa got it
because I have been told
the Mail
gets delivered
in the freezing cold

Chior Chorus:
I heard Santa
on the roof top
I heard Rudolph's
click clock, click clock's
sleigh bells
were jingling
while grazing tree tops
I heard Santa walking
and Rudolph's
Click clock's

Verse 3:
In the morning I went downstairs
It was quiet
all through the house
Granma & Granpa
were still asleep
there was my letter
I wrote to Santa
along side a empty glass
was a Baseball Glove
a hat
and a Baseball Bat

Chior Chorus:
I heard Santa
on the roof top
I heard Rudolph's
click clock, click clock's
sleigh bells
were jingling
while grazing tree tops
I heard Santa walking
and Rudolph's
Click clock's

Lyrics By :

Flyer
#2November 30th, 2007 · 08:21 AM
5 threads / 5 songs
327 posts
United Kingdom
once again flyer, another amazing song in the making..its got all making of exitement at christmas, cheeky Rudolph having a light snack on the tree tops.. and the quietness of the eve...apart from the click clocks...mmm sweet song.. you never stop amazing me. do you? cant wait to hear itttttt...xxxxxxxxx
#3November 30th, 2007 · 07:25 PM
76 threads / 5 songs
529 posts
Cook Islands
It reminds me when I was little!(probably just about everyone when they were younger.)
Maybe with like the lick clocks n such actually make those sounds
soooooooooooooo excited!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
#4November 30th, 2007 · 11:49 PM
97 threads / 43 songs
500 posts
Australia
Great lyrics. I'm eager to hear it in completion. There's just one line there that bugs me, verse 1, last line: "glowing glow", I think you should find a replacement for glowing as you're using glowing to describe the glow, but you can already tell that it's glowing just from the word glow, so another description, maybe glistening, I don't know, something else that fits...

Other than that, a smashing job, can't wait for christmas, I'll probably put up my own christmas song too.
#5December 13th, 2007 · 05:39 AM
77 threads / 45 songs
2,296 posts
United States of America
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I did change the lyrics   on the final cut WB...dunno if you have heard the song yet...but, heres the link to it

Thanks


Flyer



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