#1November 7th, 2011 · 12:53 PM
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Great chorus, what about the meter
I like this. I like the chorus. It could use a little more of a twist to be a less predictable story - sorr of vanilla in it's sentiment. Do you have a melody to sing this. It seems like the meter changes from one verse to the next, and I wonder how well each verse can be sung to the same music.

Love the chorus.

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