#1October 14th, 2006 · 01:03 AM
12 threads / 6 songs
36 posts
United States of America
Surreality
Surreality (c) 2005 by Mark Stoner and performed by Gruntled

I am living in my surreality.
-Not too far from your insanity
A place far away from normality
-This is where I call my home.

Misunderstood from those around.
Understanding not to be found.
For I live so differently.
I make up my own reality.

My surreality - Far far away

Tuned the real world out so long ago.
Memories of pain is all I know.
Now, I'm making my own wave.
The world outside I must deprave.
 
I am living in my surreality.
Not too far from your insanity.
A place far away from normality.
This is where I call my home.

My surreality - Far away from normality.

Please don't wake me from my slumber.
This dream, I want it to last.
I want it to last.
This dream of mine

I am living in my surreality.
Not too far from your insanity.
A place far away from normality.
This is where I call my home.

Happenings of the past I fear.
My recollection trully clear.
For this reason I must evade.
Eventuallity I will shade.

Living in my surreality
#2November 17th, 2006 · 09:08 PM
30 threads
169 posts
United States of America
talent
I would call this cool, and it shows lyrical talent. But it is not developed enough. By the end of the second verse I get the idea, but I'd sure like to know something about your surreal world, other than that you live in it. Bottom line, needs more content, and it can be REALLY GOOD. I would work more on it.
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