#1May 15th, 2011 · 04:08 PM
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No Parallels in History
I've been coming up with some new ideas these past weeks and I've been listening to some of my sons dnb .....  somethings clicked in any case .....
I came up with this today ;


No parallels in history
No laws of relativity
No connected move
To the groove you choose
No common denominator
No back up plan by no Terminator

Itís just me
       And you
And all this shit we take for true
If only they knew
       Where they were running to
If only they knew
       What they could do

No spirals ever after
No witches crying laughter
No tripped out tunnels
Tight as a tourniquet
I know who you are
Is all these eyes can say

Itís just me
       And you
And all this shit we take for true
If only they knew
       Where they were running to
If only they knew
       What they could do


No wheel of fortune
Taking another turn
No promises of paradise
Where terrorists burn
No cavalry
No separating sea

Itís just me
       And you
And all this shit we take for true
If only they knew
       Where they were running to
If only they knew
       What they could do
#2May 18th, 2011 · 08:27 AM
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I really like this. It is strongly suggestive without quite joining the dots, which allows people to read their own meanings in to it.

One line which kept tripping me up was "No back up plan by no Terminator" - the "by no" seems awkward and misplaced to me. Perhaps "No back up plan, no Terminator", or if you really want the "by", then "No back up plan by a Terminator".
#3May 18th, 2011 · 08:53 AM
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TheUrbanBassman wrote…
I really like this. It is strongly suggestive without quite joining the dots, which allows people to read their own meanings in to it.

One line which kept tripping me up was "No back up plan by no Terminator" - the "by no" seems awkward and misplaced to me. Perhaps "No back up plan, no Terminator", or if you really want the "by", then "No back up plan by a Terminator".

I can relate to this.
Within it's 'action' 'No backup plan by no Terminator' is stronger and jabs more, but 'No backup plan, no Terminator' has a slightly deeper and entwined meaning.
Thanks a lot for reading and commenting and I'm dead chuffed you like it! 

I personally 'hick-up' on the Terrorist bit .... I felt I was rushing it at the time, just to get it out, I'll have to re-puzzle those two lines ..... any suggestions ?
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