#1April 25th, 2011 · 05:34 PM
91 threads
73 posts
United States of America
The Inner City
Here's a little something that I wrote the other day, for you guys to look over, examine, and everything else.
It's not finished...yet. It's still in the works.

Keep a steady pace,
You never know what's next,
Soon i will leave this place,
Gone to find the very best

But to these walls i do detest,
This life is a whirlwind,
But one would never have guessed,
My soul is the purest,
Thoughts light as a breath,
But still to these walls i do protest

Feel free to drop me a line, tell me what you think about it. It really would mean a lot if you could do that, and thanks for your time!
#2April 25th, 2011 · 05:49 PM
5 threads / 5 songs
102 posts
Suriname
I'm a horrible songwriter, so I think its better to not drop you a line
I like the first verse (I think it's called that) and the last two lines
"Thoughts light as a breath" - Grappig gevonden-
#3April 25th, 2011 · 05:52 PM
91 threads
73 posts
United States of America
Hey, thanks so much for sharing your opinion!
Really means a lot.
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