This I wrote after being inspired by a classical flute piece..and while bored studying math for my exams I have the tune already, in fact I got the whole arrangement and structure in my head, and I shall upload a rough cut of the vox as soon as I get the chance...

it's hard to see
in the dark
but now there's light
and i've wisened up

i couldnt breathe
no place for life
well now i've come up
from underneath

[chorus:]
someone gave me light to see
someone gave me air to breathe
i've come up from underneath
willing to right the wrong
after what seemed so long

i heard them speak
i could only hear
but now i'll say
what i've seen from here

she weren't willing to let me out
but buried me deep in dark
even if i scream and shout
i'de only be inside her heart

[chorus:]
someone gave me light to see
someone gave me air to breathe
i've come up from underneath
willing to right the wrong
after what seemed so long

have i always been a haunting voice?
screaming inside your head alive?
i always saw he truth inside of them
but would you hear me? would you hear me?




 

Well I would like to hear you.

yeah...i'll record and upload it once i get the chance. thanks for reading!

hey aetherius
this is some simple yet powerfull lyrics writing. you have really tried hard to get the feel and you have succeded. i would love to listen to the FULL AND COMPLETE song..not any rough cut. well i think it would be great to add flute to it as it is the instrument of love or on the other hand Apparition. therefore just sit down and structre it to perfection. and then record it. ofcourse when you find time!!!!

i cant make the final version just yet..i have no equipment! so i can only make a really rough demo of the vox, and find people to collab with.

When I write songs, I like to write stories. Not just the words, but the whole structure. The flute gives the imagery and feel that I want for this...

I hope I can make the demo soon so people can get my ideas and prolly collab!!

please give me an idea of the melody what you had in mind. Would like to develope some music to this. Just send a pm.

hopefully comin soon

on your lyrics. I have read three, and they are uniformly excellent. I think there are a couple of words or lines that are a little weak, but I have a feeling that you will find them yourself I want to read and hear everything you do. I'm hooked - a fan.

weeehhaa thanks!