#1November 24th, 2007 · 12:05 PM
15 threads
63 posts
United States of America
Untitle Song About War
I couldnt think of a name for this one and so i started calling it the untitled song about war.... it would be a cool name for it in fact lol i may keep it i may not but this one is kinda just my thoughts mashed up adding some rhyming words at the end lol so tell me what you think!
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Verse:
Here I sleep
in restless dreams
of monstrosities
belonging to the past
and present schemes

Another soldier's scream
Another family
Fed a bullet's worth
Of lead

A bullet's worth
Is more than gold
They hold it close
To protect their soul

A drop of sweat
A blistered hand
A broken dream
A shattered mind, oh


Chorus:
I don't know what it means
No I don't know who we are
No I don't know what this country
Stands for anymore

This world was made
for you and me
So why can't we live
peacefully...?


Verse:
The blood of those
Who fought and died
For the beliefs they hold
so dear

Has flown forever
And will never
clot
that severed artery

A laceration
A degradation
A mutilation
An expectation, oh


Chorus:
I don't know what it means
No I don't know who we are
No I don't know what this country
Stands for anymore

This world was made
for you and me
So why can't we all just
try to BE...?


(Insert something here, instrumental solo or vocal solo thingy)


A blood-stained helmet
A heart of velvet
A mourning state of mind

And you ask
was this life
worth the sacrifice?

A recollection
from your father
of gelatin death bombs
and orange-stained forests

Brings back the rage of war...

(Possible pause before final chorus?)

Chorus:
NO!!
I don't know what it means
No I don't know who we are
No I don't know what this country
Stands for anymore

This world was made
for you and me
But I guess we'll just
have to wait and see...
#2November 27th, 2007 · 07:59 PM
75 threads / 4 songs
529 posts
Cook Islands
  baby jesus christ!I'm not into the whole war songs and government ish but this is amazing dude!
like I said A-FREAKING-MAZING! :]
can't wait to hear it ^_^

edit:title Here This Bullet Sings This Peaceful Melody (almost what I had in mind.)
#3November 27th, 2007 · 08:45 PM
11 threads / 5 songs
56 posts
United States of America
Why don't you just call it "Song About War"? And very nice lyrics man, and as she said, I'm looking forward to hearing this.
#4November 28th, 2007 · 08:55 AM
15 threads
63 posts
United States of America
Title!
GAH!!! im sooooo tired! i saw what you guys where saying about the title and i prolly should've explained it "untitled song about war" was the name, but i LOVE meows title for it and i may change it to something alittle more similar....... my guitarist and i are working on it as hard as we can its proving to be harder than it seems!!!! lol 
i will more than likely make two version because we dont have a drummer yet...... one with computer drums.........one where we teach this guy i know how to play drums!!!!  lol anyway i have a tournament this week and i wont be able to work on it that much.... but whatever saturday that is all im doing is writting this song!!!! lol thanks for the incouragement!          


EDIT: possible title - "Here the Bullets Sing a Peaceful Mealody"
#5November 28th, 2007 · 01:40 PM
75 threads / 4 songs
529 posts
Cook Islands
Here The Bullet Sings a Peacul Melody?
#6November 28th, 2007 · 06:55 PM
19 threads / 10 songs
509 posts
Japan
Mmmm very focused very powerful very good lyrics.
Started me thinking about songs with the bullet lyric,not top 10 wth the bullet .
Bang Bang Cher
Jailbreak  acdc
Indian sSunset Elton John
El passo ???
lots of references to cap popping in rap songs 2
lets hear the song soon
 
#7November 29th, 2007 · 08:52 AM
15 threads
63 posts
United States of America
MeowMachine wrote…
Here The Bullet Sings a Peacul Melody?
no move your s "here the bullets sing a peaceful melody" lol idk it just sounded cool and thats how i first read what u said.... anyway im gonna be working on this this weekend and some this after noon!!! idk when it will be finished we have alot on our plates!!!! but i am working as hard as i can to get this done!!! thanks guys
#8December 1st, 2007 · 12:30 AM
65 threads / 2 songs
1,062 posts
United States of America
This is F'ing genius! im very impressed, bro!  You better shoot me a link the second you have this up!!!!
#9December 2nd, 2007 · 06:28 PM
21 threads
235 posts
United Kingdom
These are sweet lyrics.
I like angry lyrics, specially ones aimed at stupid politicians "protecting freedom" by taking it from others.

What sort of music you got in mind for this?
#10December 3rd, 2007 · 08:43 AM
15 threads
63 posts
United States of America
Moses
Hey moses i was thinking for this song the usual party/post-hardcore rock to go with this
nothing like blazing metal or dragonforce like shredding but not mellow like a ballad or something
but kinda somewhere in the middle there!! i would like to see this happen soon...... but i may end up
having to do a collab with someone who can do drums and rythm guitar because i can handle
bass and lead but we dont have a rythm guitarist or drummer and so that is kinda holding us back!!!
i really want to see this song take off but..... i have no gas for the engines (par say) and anyway if
anyone wants to collab PM me        
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