These are the lyrics to a song I put on here waaaay back ... like a year ago... I deleted it because it wasn't understood very well, but maybe these lyrics are still worth anything. I like them myself, they intrigue me. I'd like to know what you can make of it... It's a guitar filled electroid tune... The vocals heavily effected, monotonous, but not too - ... with a hollow reverberation to them.


EVA

feels like I'm losing
sight of the moon
and I'm not wanting
to run from the day

you were hidden
captive of doom
disspelled it's wording
to say "it's been great"

one time
you lead me
into
this night
and there
you showed me
your piece
of the world

beauty
have always been
in these eyes
before
cannot
forget you
in this life
anymore

it's been a long time
it's time now for rebirth
and I want to hold you
to touch you in the flesh
I want to see you
in the mirror
and I will look back
and I want to be you
like you have been me

sometimes
I'm dreaming...

very poetic! cool.

Yeah I can actually see the choppiness of the singing in the way you wrote out the middle 2 verses. Me wanna hear-y!

Reminds me a lil Of Counting Crows.....very nice work here T...would like to hear this put to some music

Flyer