was listening to Wisdom's song "Feelings" and these lyrics sprang to mind...feedback welcome...

Verse 1 :
I don't pretend or wear false smiles
I won't hide behind false denials
Does it make me seem less in your eyes
And would you prefer it if I lied

Bridge to chorus:
It's written here, written here, written right on my face
Every ache, every ache, every ache every disgrace

Chorus:
Do I fall from grace - When my feelings slap your face?

Verse 2:
I won't deny it if I'm feeling hurt
I can't smile, can't smile when I feel like dirt
Does it make you think that I am wrong?
To not pretend that I am strong?

Bridge to Chorus 2:
Does it make you think that I'm a fool, a fool
Breaking down, breaking down, breaking down, break your rule

Do I fall from grace - When my feelings slap your face

wowow, those are pretty strong lyrics.

I wouldn't wanna be the one this is aimed at though I sure as hell hope you're not yappin at the mirror.

wow, anyway, inspiring! will it be used on the existing instrumental? I'd like to hear how that would sound yeha!

Hmmm - do I sense a little anger in there!

Nice lyrics though Spoony.  They read very well, and certainly dish out a whole host of feelings!

And now I want to hear you put them to the music.

Not really anger..more like frustration...

and yes Puppet...I wrote them to go with the existing instrumental

thanks for the comments - do the lyrics really sound that angry? 

I think they sound angry, but not in a cutsey avril lavigne kind of way...if you get what I mean!
Like them alot! This bits the best 'It's written here, written here, written right on my face
Every ache, every ache, every ache every disgrace'
I have huge trouble writing lyrics. Teach me!

yeh teach me as well.

very nice. I like em all.

these are awesome lyrics!!!!!!!

love 'em and cant wait to hear the full song!

keep it up!

Really liking these lyrics

I'm curious about your vocal track!

Can't wait! Talk to you soon!