#1August 24th, 2006 · 01:00 PM
34 threads / 17 songs
581 posts
Canada
lyrics for Feelings
was listening to Wisdom's song "Feelings" and these lyrics sprang to mind...feedback welcome...

Verse 1 :
I don't pretend or wear false smiles
I won't hide behind false denials
Does it make me seem less in your eyes
And would you prefer it if I lied

Bridge to chorus:
It's written here, written here, written right on my face
Every ache, every ache, every ache every disgrace

Chorus:
Do I fall from grace - When my feelings slap your face?

Verse 2:
I won't deny it if I'm feeling hurt
I can't smile, can't smile when I feel like dirt
Does it make you think that I am wrong?
To not pretend that I am strong?

Bridge to Chorus 2:
Does it make you think that I'm a fool, a fool
Breaking down, breaking down, breaking down, break your rule

Do I fall from grace - When my feelings slap your face
#2August 24th, 2006 · 01:03 PM
117 threads / 54 songs
3,066 posts
Netherlands
wowow, those are pretty strong lyrics.

I wouldn't wanna be the one this is aimed at though I sure as hell hope you're not yappin at the mirror.

wow, anyway, inspiring! will it be used on the existing instrumental? I'd like to hear how that would sound yeha!
#3August 24th, 2006 · 01:08 PM
54 threads / 29 songs
1,552 posts
United Kingdom
Hmmm - do I sense a little anger in there!

Nice lyrics though Spoony.  They read very well, and certainly dish out a whole host of feelings!

And now I want to hear you put them to the music.

#4August 24th, 2006 · 03:10 PM
34 threads / 17 songs
581 posts
Canada
Not really anger..more like frustration...

and yes Puppet...I wrote them to go with the existing instrumental

thanks for the comments - do the lyrics really sound that angry? 
#5August 24th, 2006 · 03:56 PM
117 threads / 88 songs
256 posts
United Kingdom
I think they sound angry, but not in a cutsey avril lavigne kind of way...if you get what I mean!
Like them alot! This bits the best 'It's written here, written here, written right on my face
Every ache, every ache, every ache every disgrace'
I have huge trouble writing lyrics. Teach me!
#6August 24th, 2006 · 04:20 PM
66 threads / 55 songs
697 posts
United States of America
yeh teach me as well.

very nice. I like em all.
#7August 25th, 2006 · 01:52 AM
24 threads
319 posts
Malaysia
these are awesome lyrics!!!!!!!

love 'em and cant wait to hear the full song!

keep it up!
#8August 26th, 2006 · 07:55 AM
49 threads / 43 songs
130 posts
Netherlands
:D
Really liking these lyrics

I'm curious about your vocal track!

Can't wait! Talk to you soon!
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