#1January 4th, 2011 · 04:23 PM
340 threads / 59 songs
4,344 posts
United Kingdom
I remind you
This is long and slow.....as a song that is, you can read it as quick as you like.
I imagine and sing it to be a bit of an epic.....strong deliberate vocal, emotionally sweeping music.....

It was written in a lay-by on my way home from a coffee-shop having had a rather intense conversation with the girly behind the bar......it has nothing to do with her really but then that's just how nothing is!

I remind you,
Of the night
I remind you,
Of the time
I remind you,
Do you recall?
Do you remember?
Anything at all

I remind you,
Of the day
I remind you,
Of your self
I remind you,
Do you recall?
When it was nothing
Nothing at all

Posters on the wall
Fat, Freddy and the Ball
Remember me
Remember me

God in your soul
The devil in your shoes
Remember me
Remember me

Her hand in yours
Now such distant shores
Remember me
Remember me

The radio is on
She answers in a song
Remember me
Remember me

Remember me

I remind you,
Of the night
The night you found out,
That it was all right
Now
I remind you,
Do you recall?
Do you remember,
Any thing at all?


I remind you,
Of the time
The time you realised,
You were left behind
Then
I remind you,
Do you recall?
When it was nothing,
Nothing at all

I remind you,
Of the day
The day you dreamed of,
Each and every way
Now
I remind you,
Do you recall?
Do you remember?
Any thing at all?

I remind you,
Of your self
The one you know,
Is no-one else
I remind you,
Do you recall?
When it was nothing,
Nothing at all

Do you remember?
Any thing at all

Do you remember?
When it was nothing at all
#2January 10th, 2011 · 07:18 PM
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166 posts
United States of America
"God in your soul
The devil in your shoes
Remember me
Remember me"

BOOM! I love these lines man!! Amazing!

now I'm not so keen on the level of repetition of the line "remember me"
my vision of this tune may be alittle different than yours man...
more than likely is
I hope this gets recorded man! Can't wait!
#3January 15th, 2011 · 05:27 PM
340 threads / 59 songs
4,344 posts
United Kingdom
DowntownSasquatch wrote…
"God in your soul
The devil in your shoes
Remember me
Remember me"

BOOM! I love these lines man!! Amazing!

now I'm not so keen on the level of repetition of the line "remember me"
my vision of this tune may be alittle different than yours man...
more than likely is
I hope this gets recorded man! Can't wait!

Jackson you old ninja! Whats up?
Snooping around the lyrics review again I see !
Thanks for reading, and I'm glad you got such a hit from my humble words.
Your right and your right...it is repetitive, has more to do with me trying to put the same words in a different order just to make verses. 

And that bit about god in yer shoes is the better of the four, but taking bits out does not fit the story.

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