hyp didnt like thse but i still do so im posting them


i saw a girl chewing her nails
i got 90% on that test and still failed
i stuck out the finger, heard them say
all the rogues go screaming that way! 
i different girl on my bed
i didn't care i just went ahead
she cheated on me with my brother…

then my father

(OUCH!)

say what! u feel when a girl slaps on your face
say what! u think when you’ve been replaced
say what! u feel when you get to second base
say what! u think life is nothing but a race

i heard someone shouting at me from the back
i turned to see the sisters from three nights ago
with their cousins, ant and mother,
 I had to get Outa there before they attacked
they  came  running towards me
their hair all wild and their eyes all black
i shouted out loud but no one heard me
they hit me…
....you know where

(OUCH!)

this is a story from a player going where

say what! u feel when a girl slaps on your face
say what! u think when you’ve been replaced
say what! u feel when you get to second base
say what! u think life is nothing but a race

say what! u feel when a girl slaps on your face
say what! u think when you’ve been replaced
say what! u feel when you get to second base
say what! u think life is nothing but a race

hahahahahahahhahahahaha

yeah its funny....surely its gonna be a rocking fast-paced song!
is it recoreded yet?

I still think the "say what! u feel..." would be better like "say what? when..."

Aw, made me smile...angry and very strange at the same time...?