Title: Wonderful

(I'll be posting a recording as soon as I get a mic that doesn't make me sound like a gargoyle lol)

Should I stay
Or should I go
What do you want me to be
Yeah what do I know

Drop cloth
Cycle wash
Peacefull night
Am I right
Who am I talking to

Alright
Say what you will
Yeah say what you want
I'm not listening to you
Maybe it's the

Drop cloth
Cycle wash
Peacefull night
Am I right
Who am I talking to

Yeah anyways
A sideways glance
Means alot to someone
who don't get the chance
To think that you even
Have a thought about them
One or twice
Oh they're singing in their heads
What a wonderful night

lol ok... i must say your chorus is very cetchy and great job... but i there is no story line or any thing... and the beginning line should be changed so that it doesnt sound like your stealing some one elses fraze. but other than that i have no complaints! are you planning on repeating these verses threw out the song? because if not you may want to add a couple more stanzas to make the song a bit longer

paper doll

Yeah I'm going to add more stuff to it I just needed to get the genreal idea out there. Right now when I record it (horribly) it ends up 1:37 because I'm just awsome like that, so I think 1 or 2 more verses would make it around 2:30 or 3 minutes i I do it right. Thanks!