| Broken Home |
this song is just some stuff i was feeling and it needs work if you have any ideas i was appreciate them also there is no chorus
Broken Home
I hate this house and everything in it,
The walls are broken and the paint is dripping,
I'm trapped and no one can help me escape this misery
and I want to get a way from this hell
This home is as a broken puzzle and I can’t find the missing pieces
The rooms are dark and damp and on the floor are the broken lamps
I feel so alone and so out of place its like I'm an outsider
This place is a nightmare and there is no chance of waking up
Broken Home
I hate this house and everything in it,
The walls are broken and the paint is dripping,
I'm trapped and no one can help me escape this misery
and I want to get a way from this hell
This home is as a broken puzzle and I can’t find the missing pieces
The rooms are dark and damp and on the floor are the broken lamps
I feel so alone and so out of place its like I'm an outsider
This place is a nightmare and there is no chance of waking up
I like these,I would change the title and add a 3rd verse with a light at the end of the tunnel,some hope?
Chorus idea,
All our pictures hang on the wall
Our fake smiles, tell it all
In these burning beds we lay
Why do we live this way
One day it will be just a memory
Mended, free of misery
I don't know,just popped in my head.
Chorus idea,
All our pictures hang on the wall
Our fake smiles, tell it all
In these burning beds we lay
Why do we live this way
One day it will be just a memory
Mended, free of misery
I don't know,just popped in my head.
yeah i got Pink out of this as well, though it doesnt really have a certin flow to it, i like it 
| and here you go again |
sorry i am reposting these witha few minor changes lol, ok so here they are again just with fewer errors and a couple of added lines.. so um yeah. like i said before go ahead and pick threw it see wha tyou like and dont like feel free to change any thing or every thing, just thought i would help out so ummm yes! and let me know you make a song out of these k? i would love to hear it!
the girl made of paper doll stuffing
paper doll
Broken homes broken bones
I hate this house and everything in it,
The walls are broken the paint is dripping,
I'm trapped and no one can help me
I want to escape from this hell
This home is as a broken puzzle
I can’t find the missing pieces
The rooms are dark and damp
on the floor are the broken lamps
I feel so alone and so out of place
This place is a nightmare I cant escape
(chorus)
our pictures hang on the wall
Our fake smiles, tell it all
In these burning beds we lay
Why do we live this way?
One day it will be a memory
Mended, free of misery
On the outside looking in
Every one wants something then gone again
This puzzle piece I cant fix
I cant make the damn thing fit
im suffocating
Just give me some room to breath
(bridge)
No more screaming
No more fighting
Tired of crying
Some one hold me
Where the hell were you when I needed you?
Come back to me and lets be
A family
This broken home
Is made of broken bones
The artificial us smile back
Why must we be blue and black?
This broken home
Is made of broken bones
The artificial us smile back
Why must we keep fighting back?
(chorus)
our pictures hang on the wall
Our fake smiles, tell it all
In these burning beds we lay
Why do we live this way?
One day it will be a memory
Mended, free of misery
so ummm yes! and let me know you make a song out of these k? i would love to hear it!the girl made of paper doll stuffing
paper doll
Broken homes broken bones
I hate this house and everything in it,
The walls are broken the paint is dripping,
I'm trapped and no one can help me
I want to escape from this hell
This home is as a broken puzzle
I can’t find the missing pieces
The rooms are dark and damp
on the floor are the broken lamps
I feel so alone and so out of place
This place is a nightmare I cant escape
(chorus)
our pictures hang on the wall
Our fake smiles, tell it all
In these burning beds we lay
Why do we live this way?
One day it will be a memory
Mended, free of misery
On the outside looking in
Every one wants something then gone again
This puzzle piece I cant fix
I cant make the damn thing fit
im suffocating
Just give me some room to breath
(bridge)
No more screaming
No more fighting
Tired of crying
Some one hold me
Where the hell were you when I needed you?
Come back to me and lets be
A family
This broken home
Is made of broken bones
The artificial us smile back
Why must we be blue and black?
This broken home
Is made of broken bones
The artificial us smile back
Why must we keep fighting back?
(chorus)
our pictures hang on the wall
Our fake smiles, tell it all
In these burning beds we lay
Why do we live this way?
One day it will be a memory
Mended, free of misery
| re: and here you go again |
alittlepaperdoll wrote…
sorry i am reposting these witha few minor changes lol, ok so here they are again just with fewer errors and a couple of added lines.. so um yeah. like i said before go ahead and pick threw it see wha tyou like and dont like feel free to change any thing or every thing, just thought i would help out
the girl made of paper doll stuffing
paper doll
Broken homes broken bones
I hate this house and everything in it,
The walls are broken the paint is dripping,
I'm trapped and no one can help me
I want to escape from this hell
This home is as a broken puzzle
I can’t find the missing pieces
The rooms are dark and damp
on the floor are the broken lamps
I feel so alone and so out of place
This place is a nightmare I cant escape
(chorus)
our pictures hang on the wall
Our fake smiles, tell it all
In these burning beds we lay
Why do we live this way?
One day it will be a memory
Mended, free of misery
On the outside looking in
Every one wants something then gone again
This puzzle piece I cant fix
I cant make the damn thing fit
im suffocating
Just give me some room to breath
(bridge)
No more screaming
No more fighting
Tired of crying
Some one hold me
Where the hell were you when I needed you?
Come back to me and lets be
A family
This broken home
Is made of broken bones
The artificial us smile back
Why must we be blue and black?
This broken home
Is made of broken bones
The artificial us smile back
Why must we keep fighting back?
(chorus)
our pictures hang on the wall
Our fake smiles, tell it all
In these burning beds we lay
Why do we live this way?
One day it will be a memory
Mended, free of misery
I liked it before,this works 2,any problems of it flowing can be solved when its time to lay down the vocals.
yeah i didnt write this song with any melody 
i just wrote what came from my head. 
i just wrote what came from my head. 
THEBLINDEDADDICTION wrote…
yeah i didnt write this song with any melody
that's ofcourse not a problem. I sometimes do that too, just to get the ideas on paper first, and when it's time to put them to the music I cut and rephrase until it fits (still keeping it aesthetically sound, ofcourse). actually I sometimes manage to cut down every single line in a lyric to 2 or 3 keywords only, which makes for a very powerful vocal line in the end.
Getting howto's and suggestions and whatnot's on your lyrics.. well, that's what this part of the forum is for, right? so don't do the
and the thing man, thats all ok. And for another thing I'm sure it's possible to fit in ANY lyric to any song, even your uncut/un-rewritten version, really. 
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