#1August 16th, 2006 · 12:38 PM
4 threads / 1 songs
8 posts
United Kingdom
Untitled song in want of title...
Ahoy... these lyrics are a product of (semi) automatic writing, so they dont appear to be very coherent as a whole and probably employ a lot of metaphor that's built into my psyche... if you go in for psychology....

Anyway, the song is all written but has no name, and I'm a bit stumped to be honest, so any help would be appreciated, and of course tell me what you like/dislike about them...

Hopefully I'm going to record the actual song with my band soon, so that'll be posted at some point with any luck...

here you go:

Beautiful desk of plastic wood
No food for thought but what I carry
This heat is draining, undercover, super-sized
The air hits me and I have to say good bye

Clever monkey be the clown; dance a round, red overalls
Very peaceful monkey, say nothing at all

This shadow flag to cut my hair, in bondage to pledge allegiance
Firefly night in that local place
Sinners and play-writes singing of big snow-covered tree
Terracotta red

Let’s go down to the practice room; it’s our inside riverside
Bed down; make me a pallet on your floor
#2August 20th, 2006 · 12:51 PM
44 threads / 6 songs
305 posts
United States of America
Title
Shadow flag
#3November 19th, 2006 · 05:08 AM
30 threads
169 posts
United States of America
Title
Shadow Flag works
Firefly Night
Riverside
Clever Monkey

Since this does reflect your psyche, as you said, it's really difficult to tell which Title may capture the feeling you want. But these are some ideas.
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