#1August 7th, 2006 · 11:04 AM
2 threads
1 posts
Denmark
You've got an idea for this song?
Hi, I've got this song I wrote a few days ago, and I gotta ask you about two things: First of all, I don't know what to call it? I thought of 'Love me too', but the last song I wrote also had 'Love' in the title... I also had 'Can't help' in mind.
Secondly, in the second chorus i use the word 'blissing', like 'bliss'. Do you think that it can be used that way?


Go by, go by
you always seem to catch my eye
oh my, I try
but you just spread your wings and fly

New day, new day
this is the time and I’m ok
go say, say “hey”
your restless mind don’t ever seem to stay

Girl, I can’t help loving you
and, I can’t help missing you
oh, I can’t help wishing you
would love me too

I am, you are
how did I end up in your car?
Let's play the game
We burst into a roaring flame

Girl, I can’t help loving you
and, I can’t help missing you
oh, I can’t help blissing you
You love me too
#2August 20th, 2006 · 01:01 PM
44 threads / 6 songs
305 posts
United States of America
Beautiful. Just take out the line "go say, say 'hey'" and your good.

Oh, and change "Let's play the game" to "Let's play a game"
#3August 20th, 2006 · 01:02 PM
44 threads / 6 songs
305 posts
United States of America
Tile: New day.
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