#1July 20th, 2006 · 08:13 PM
3 threads
2 posts
Norway
He She Killer
She'll rip your heart out and throw it in the trash
she'll make your brain hit overdrive and crash
Fry your mind and enjoy your ride
This is better than your urge to hide
but there are times when you just gotta say stop
And turn around on the fucking spot!

she has every man in her hand and around her middle finger
She'll curse you if you make a wrong move that will linger
you'll never have the time too slow down and take a breath
if you do, your paranoia would result in a painfull death
easy handling never made sense so her
You cant come around and stroke her by her fur


[1] can't she see the hearts she's broken
ripping up and down is okay
now she got shit all over her face
time's gone by and she's all in disgrace

*SOLO*

She's been in every town on the face of earth
where every man has run with his own security hurt
From the moments of commitment she'll own your ass
Coming down hard if you meet something of class
Sign your name on your stone before you're dead
If not she'll do it herself and take your head

[1]

If you're lucky and get away you should enjoy your time
Cause another day another woman will come your way
Showing no mercy as you've known for all these years
your stubbornes are less likely too cause any tears
Time goes by and so do you but she'll be stuck in her time of pray
Where every man has discovered her game and rejects her to this day
#2July 21st, 2006 · 09:42 AM
34 threads / 17 songs
581 posts
Canada
woah - quite the woman! fur and all!!

It's hard to tell if your metre works..not having an idea of what type of beat and music you had in mind to go with this...but from purely looking at the lyrics, it seems like your couplets are inconsistent.  If you put this to music, it seems like you would be rushing through some of the lines just to get all the words in, and elongating words at other times to stretch them out to fit.

I do like the story you are telling here...sounds like you had a run in with a praying mantis woman!!
#3July 21st, 2006 · 05:47 PM
3 threads
2 posts
Norway
I kinda thought so put in a style Ala. Mötley Crüe(same Ol' situation) or Guns N' Roses - Rocket Queen
#4July 21st, 2006 · 06:18 PM
7 threads / 2 songs
23 posts
United Kingdom
That's how I heard it
.., a heavy metal rant aginst womanhood. I can hear the Robert Plant high pitch howl and the lugubrious bass and drum. Squeeze that lemon...
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