i know i havent posted on here in a while, and i havent been very good at writing lyrics lately either. so this song is something that i put every feeling, and emotion into. this song is me.


your broken voice,
it haunts me now,
harsh words are all that's coming out,
you break my smile
and there's a wall that you built up,
but now it's lying in the mudd,
we broke it down

oh,
all those times when i was blind,
i was in the palm of your hand,
and all those memories are left behind,
they are painted in the sand

so come on,
don't say you love me,
the wall we made together is broken down,
and even if our hands fit together perfectly,
at the end of the day,
it's just me

sometimes you cried,
i did my best,
to try and pass all of your tests,
you captured me,
you're beautiful,
and full of life,
but it's the harshness in your eyes,
so i set you free

oh come on,
don't say that you loved me,
the wall we built together is breaking down,
even if our hands fit together perfectly,
i'm gone,
what we had is buried in the ground

(instrumental)

come on,
don't say that you love me,
the wall we built together is breaking down,
and i watch as you float up above me,
out of the darkness of this town,
you can do anything,
but don't say that you love me,
because at the end of the day,
it's just me

feel free to drop me a line, and tell me what you think.

I like these, the lyrics are interesting and their easy to sing. I'm not sure what you were thinking for music but I wrote some chords for the verse and prechorus if you're interested, I'm still thinking about how to do the chorus though. Good work.

yeah i'm not sure what i want to do with this song, i was thinking of it as more of a  ballad and emotional piece, but i havent gotten around to putting it to music yet.
thank you though!