#1June 20th, 2006 · 02:38 PM
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4 posts
United States of America
This life.
all these rhymes written in ghetto times/living life like there ain't no tomorrow/think its time to go/ if i reach under my seat/imma pull out the heat/movin to my own beats/ain't gonna be swallowed up by the streets/most of these are only the pieces of the life i live/ my own soul i would give/to be free from this state of mind/last night we crossed the line/cant go back to before that slap/busted open an old ladies head with a cap/did it for a few bucks/this shit sucks/gonna take after the armor trucks/better lock my ass up in the pen/ain't no court gonna look away again/been here before/fucking cops kickin in the door/ gotta get away/cant go to jail today/i got fuckin bills to pay/ think i should pay-off the DA/ only one way to escape/pull out my glock/you know i keep that bitch cocked
#2June 20th, 2006 · 02:40 PM
34 threads / 17 songs
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Canada
uh...woah...is this rap?
#3June 20th, 2006 · 02:41 PM
1 threads
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United States of America
not really. i dont flow with a strictly rap or rock genre. i can bend my lyrics to match the music. i just wanna get my shit out, ya know?
#4June 20th, 2006 · 02:43 PM
34 threads / 17 songs
581 posts
Canada
cool...what kind of music did you have in mind for this?
#5June 20th, 2006 · 02:46 PM
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United States of America
id like to maybe do a rap core or darkwave/techno stylus
#6June 20th, 2006 · 02:47 PM
34 threads / 17 songs
581 posts
Canada
Maybe if you could use a format for lyrics similar to what others use...it might make it easier for me to get the flow of this...as it is - it all seems to run together, and the meter is awkward (meter being using a consistent number of syllables per line).

You have a very frank way of expressing yourself...which in some genres can really work.  You create a very violent and dark mood with these words.
#7June 20th, 2006 · 03:03 PM
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United States of America
hehe, its whats inside. if i actually had time to rip some music, i could balance it out a little better.
#8June 28th, 2006 · 01:24 AM
66 threads / 55 songs
697 posts
United States of America
ahh k

hmmm they're nice.

they go somewhere, there's a story line, which is good. in a lot of rap music there's not much of a story line...

Do you rap?

I'd like to hear this with some music.
#9June 28th, 2006 · 06:49 AM
116 threads / 53 songs
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Netherlands
SoldierSevenDeuce wrote…
hehe, its whats inside. if i actually had time to rip some music, i could balance it out a little better.

well you might want to work on "what's inside": "busted open an old ladies head with a cap" right on bro, sounds like pure love to me.

says he who wrote Acid Son

PX
#10June 30th, 2006 · 01:30 AM
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4 posts
United States of America
i hope to have an actual track out by august. hopefully my whole album will be ready. thanks for the posi guys.
#11June 30th, 2006 · 07:31 AM
160 threads / 88 songs
1,666 posts
United States of America
check the folllowing:

          http://forum.bandamp.com/Audio_Review/2398.html


                     Jim K (who wrote Techno Erotica)
#12July 15th, 2006 · 08:00 PM
77 threads / 45 songs
2,296 posts
United States of America
hey
"This Life"   eh   thought I had it rough... this is deff  Rap material...would like to hear it with music...even though Im not into Rap.....

Ralph
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