| This life. |
all these rhymes written in ghetto times/living life like there ain't no tomorrow/think its time to go/ if i reach under my seat/imma pull out the heat/movin to my own beats/ain't gonna be swallowed up by the streets/most of these are only the pieces of the life i live/ my own soul i would give/to be free from this state of mind/last night we crossed the line/cant go back to before that slap/busted open an old ladies head with a cap/did it for a few bucks/this shit sucks/gonna take after the armor trucks/better lock my ass up in the pen/ain't no court gonna look away again/been here before/fucking cops kickin in the door/ gotta get away/cant go to jail today/i got fuckin bills to pay/ think i should pay-off the DA/ only one way to escape/pull out my glock/you know i keep that bitch cocked
not really. i dont flow with a strictly rap or rock genre. i can bend my lyrics to match the music. i just wanna get my shit out, ya know?
id like to maybe do a rap core or darkwave/techno stylus
Maybe if you could use a format for lyrics similar to what others use...it might make it easier for me to get the flow of this...as it is - it all seems to run together, and the meter is awkward (meter being using a consistent number of syllables per line).
You have a very frank way of expressing yourself...which in some genres can really work. You create a very violent and dark mood with these words.
You have a very frank way of expressing yourself...which in some genres can really work. You create a very violent and dark mood with these words.
hehe, its whats inside. if i actually had time to rip some music, i could balance it out a little better.
ahh k
hmmm they're nice.
they go somewhere, there's a story line, which is good. in a lot of rap music there's not much of a story line...
Do you rap?
I'd like to hear this with some music.
hmmm they're nice.
they go somewhere, there's a story line, which is good. in a lot of rap music there's not much of a story line...
Do you rap?
I'd like to hear this with some music.
SoldierSevenDeuce wrote…
hehe, its whats inside. if i actually had time to rip some music, i could balance it out a little better.
well you might want to work on "what's inside": "busted open an old ladies head with a cap" right on bro, sounds like pure love to me.
says he who wrote Acid Son
PX
i hope to have an actual track out by august. hopefully my whole album will be ready. thanks for the posi guys.
check the folllowing:
http://forum.bandamp.com/Audio_Review/2398.html
Jim K (who wrote Techno Erotica)
http://forum.bandamp.com/Audio_Review/2398.html
Jim K (who wrote Techno Erotica)
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