Here's the lyrics of a new song

She puts me down

She knocks me out
She pushes me around
All of the time she puts me down

She says I'm old
She says I'm bold
I'm not the one she used to love

I don't know why I stick around
It's obvious the love is gone
And all the time she puts me down

When I come home
she alway frawn
I still love her but what's the point

She locks me in
She kicks me out
She thinks I live a life of sin

I don't know why I stick around
It's obvious the love is gone
And all the time she puts me down

I try to smile
Swallow my pride
But all the time she puts me down

I play it cool
But I'm such a fool
And everybody knows in town
That all the time she puts me down (Bis)

you can hear the song here
http://forum.bandamp.com/The_Pit/27006.html

The lyrics are great - the video puts it all together in perspective. Wow, is this an abusive relationship or what?

     --XFactor--

Well I thought that would suit valentine days!

She locks me out
She kicks me in

She locks me up
She kicks me down

Just loving your lyrics Vince
I love stuff like this, the bare truths of a tormented man, it's all so obvious but nothing makes sense.
I like your 'no nonsense' approach towards the emotions your describing....very heavy and violent subject yet so truly written and to the point it becomes light and nearly humorous