#1January 20th, 2010 · 01:04 AM
40 threads
165 posts
United States of America
Pretty Little Picture
Apart of me is still believing this lie
The one that says youíll be here all the time
But its slowly its starting to fade away
I have to let this go before i go crazy

I donít regret giving you that piece of me
just wish in some way that maybe you could see
that being with you held me up when I was down
All this time alone, its sinking in now

It was a pretty picture of you and me
framed in time, were its left to be
remember it and smile
remember it and cry
a pretty picture of you and I
sometimes I wanna touch it up,
sometimes I wanna tear it down
its hard to leave it in the past,
were its best to be found


daydreaming my days away on what may come
then i get the feeling its already done
One moment something happens to make me believe
the next thing you know Iím  faithless and crying

even now I wonder, is this how its ends
or if  Iím meant to wait for something to begin
good things do come to those who wait
Iím not really one to waste my life away

(chorus)

I donít regret giving you that piece of me
just wish in some way that maybe you could see
this pretty little picture of you and me.

()()()()()()()

just finished touching this up a bit, switched around the chorus, changed some words and such.

thank you for reading.

-Miss White
#2March 15th, 2010 · 06:13 PM
187 threads / 27 songs
2,805 posts
Germany
well how do you catch a music for this?
any plans?
#3March 16th, 2010 · 12:53 PM
40 threads
165 posts
United States of America
no plans as of yet.. I've put this song aside for a bit
but if I had to say right now it would most likely be simple, just maybe piano... have any ideas??
#4March 16th, 2010 · 03:54 PM
340 threads / 59 songs
4,344 posts
United Kingdom
I like the 'pretty little picture' idea, sounds good and could go nicely with the appropriate music.
The main body does not really excite me so much...it's a a soul story of love lost....but the chorus I like a lot.
It's the pretty picture that carries it well, I find "imagination" a bit long winded for a song and full of syllables.
And something else I cant let go of is:

sometimes I wanna touch it up,
sometimes I wanna tear it down
but I'll leave it where it fell, behind the cupboard
were maybe its best be found

I though this gave it a different kind of twist?
#5March 16th, 2010 · 04:49 PM
40 threads
165 posts
United States of America
well thank you for your comment

I really like that!

"sometimes I wanna touch it up,
sometimes I wanna tear it down
but I'll leave it where it fell, behind the cupboard
were maybe its best be found"

maybe not a 'cupboard' though... hmmm thinking... but i deffinitally like that idea!
and I agree 'imagination' is a tad bit long...

its really still in the works, it was one of those songs you just write down directly off the top of your head...

thanks s'much!
 
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