#1June 9th, 2006 · 11:51 PM
9 threads / 4 songs
209 posts
India
Good Bye
this song is based at the time of graduation
departure of frndz
crying
but a hope to meet each other..


is it the time for me to say  my frndz good bye
may be we would meet outside while passing by
the days we spent together are over
how i wish to live life all over
i say to u my frndz , with a broken heart
this departure will not break us apart
we have to face the truth , we all know
that its the time for me to say
goodbye , good bye , goodbye my frdnz goodbye.....

it is the time for me to say my frndz goodbye
from the time we together used to laugjh & cry
i never thought this day would come so early
never thought that just like that time would fly
the best abolut frndship is that
its sweetest memoirs we all will share'
we have to face the truth , we all know
that its the time for me to say
goodbye , good bye , goodbye my frdnz goodbye.....

we may not be able to spend time together
but we would remain frndz for ever
now my frndz with a hope to meet each other
we shall say to each other
Goodbye, goodbye, goodbye my frnds good bye....
#2June 10th, 2006 · 12:12 AM
66 threads / 55 songs
697 posts
United States of America
ok good.

I'm not normally good with lyrics... but you asked me to review so here I am

here's what I think,
I think they're plenty meaningful and heart felt...
but...

I think that they've all been said before.
maybe I'm wrong...
like I said, I'm not good with the lyrics...

if it was me?
I'd add some sort of personal touch.
maybe reference something that happened to you.

just a suggestion.

anyway.. I'd like to hear this in a song.
#3June 10th, 2006 · 12:25 PM
48 threads / 7 songs
429 posts
United States of America
hey
ok i am reveiwing for you ok?

the "goodbye friends goodbye" i've heared before from the disney chanell "bear in the big blue house" it's a cartoon for toddlers. so rethink that

also i agree with taka, put some experience or refrence of some sort some where it soenst have to be long, but it'll make it better as long as it's there.

and now for the lyrics of the "luna song" (im not sure if thats what it's really called on the show.)

Goodbye Song

Bear: Hey, this was really fun
Luna: We hope you liked it too
Bear: Seems like we've just begun
Both: When suddenly we're through
Bear: Goodbye, goodbye, good friends,
goodbye
Both: 'Cause now it's time to go
Bear: But, hey, I say, well, that's OK
Luna: 'Cause we'll see you very soon,
I know
Bear: (Very soon, I know)
Both: Goodbye, goodbye, good friends,
goodbye
Bear: And tomorrow, just like today
Luna: (Goodbye - today)
Both: The moon, the bear
And the Big Blue House
We'll be waiting for you to come
and play
To come and play
To come and play
Bear: Bye now!

er yeah, so try to work that bit out to ok?
#4June 11th, 2006 · 12:32 AM
9 threads / 4 songs
209 posts
India
oh my god!!!
i didnt knew that ..... well then i would rethink on it...
#5June 11th, 2006 · 03:48 AM
24 threads / 9 songs
284 posts
Mexico
hehe, i have read this lyrics and I found the same of taka

the common places and someone said it before

but this is not the problem

our first language is not the english, so we use the common phrases to expressing our thoughts

the idea is good, the emotion differs in each one, but the situation is the same, so what's the problem?

hasta la vista baby!
#6June 11th, 2006 · 01:10 PM
9 threads / 4 songs
209 posts
India
thanx
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