#1November 11th, 2009 · 11:39 PM
1 threads
1 posts
United States of America
Lonely Statue.... lemme know what ya think!
Lonely Statue
Paint those inflated smiles
all across the sky,
and watch them float into the sun.

For she looked so happy
as she watched those rose pedals drift away.

As I tangle myself in tongue-twisted strings,
She is floating like a bubble in my orbit.

Forever my lonely statue,
lost beneath the city.
Words will find their way,
so don't drown yet.

Diminished light of my life,
where has it gone?
She has stolen all of my mind,
but doesn't realize that I hold her heart at all times.

Forever my lonely statue,
lost beneath the city.
Words will find their way,
so don't drown yet.
#2November 12th, 2009 · 08:37 PM
15 threads / 8 songs
322 posts
Sweden
This is really good! I like it.
#3November 20th, 2009 · 12:42 PM
1 threads
1 posts
United States of America
Thanks! I'm putting it to a slower progressive, almost beatles-esk chord progression and melody.
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